grammar fixes

videojs · Nov 8, 2023 · 3b5d2a9 · 3b5d2a9
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diff --git a/docs/content-steering.md b/docs/content-steering.md
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 # Content Steering
 
 Content Steering provides content creators a method of runtime control over
-the location where segments are fetched via a content steering server and
+the location from which segments are fetched via a content steering server and
 pathways defined in the content manifest. For a working example visit
 https://www.content-steering.com/.
 
 HLS and DASH each define their own specific Content Steering tags and properties
-that prescribe how the client will fetch the content steering manifest as well
+that prescribe how the client should fetch the content steering manifest as well
 as make steering decisions. `#EXT-X-CONTENT-STEERING` and `<ContentSteering>` respectively.
 
 For reference, HLS spec section 4.4.6.6:
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ VHS will request the content steering manifest from the location defined in the
 content steering tag in the `.m3u8` or `.mpd` and refresh the steering manifest
 at an interval defined in that manifest.
 
-Content steering manifest response will look something like this:
+A content steering manifest response will look something like this:
 ```
 {
  "VERSION": 1,
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ Content steering manifest response will look something like this:
  "CDN-PRIORITY": ["beta","alpha"]
 }
 ```
-Where `CDN-PRIORITY` represents either `PATHWAY-PRIORITY` for HLS or `SERVICE-LOCATION-PRIORITY` for DASH. This priority collection of keys will match with either a `PATHWAY-ID` or `serviceLocation` (HLS and DASH respectively) associated with a location where VHS can fetch segments.
+`CDN-PRIORITY` represents either `PATHWAY-PRIORITY` for HLS or `SERVICE-LOCATION-PRIORITY` for DASH. This list of keys in priority order will match with either a `PATHWAY-ID` or `serviceLocation` (HLS and DASH respectively) associated with a location where VHS can fetch segments.
 
-VHS will attempt to fetch segments from the locations defined in the steering manifest response, in the order, then during playback provide quality of experience metrics back to the steering server which can then adjust the steering decision accordingly.
+VHS will attempt to fetch segments from the locations defined in the steering manifest response in the order. Then, during playback, VHS will provide quality of experience metrics back to the steering server which can adjust the steering guidance accordingly.
 
 ## Notable Support