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Weaving a tale of a tower, smoke, and intrigue. And the prescribed edits! #4

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8 changes: 8 additions & 0 deletions english/eating-walls/eating-marshmallows.md
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After taking a few bites, you start to feel sick. You're not sure this was a
good idea. On the other hand, it sure is tasty!

Sitting down next to the partially eaten marshmallow wall, your stomach begins to grumble, churn, and babble. Panicked by the sounds, you stand up--hoping to walk off the uneasy feeling. Upon standing up, your stomach quiets and you entertain how to spend the rest of the day.
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This line is pretty long. Could you add some line breaks? That will make the raw file easier to read.


Do you:

[Sit back down, and go to sleep](more-sleep/more-sleep.md)?
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This link is broken. Did you mean ../sleep/more-sleep/more-sleep.md?


[Go exploring outside](../explore-outside/explore-outside.md)?
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Walking out of the hole you created from gobbling marshmallows, you step into a valley full of odd sights and sounds. In the distance, you notice a tower that has caught fire, but is smoking a deep shade of purple.
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This line is long also.

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[Ask for a s'more](smore-eating/delicious.md)

[Go back to sleep](../marshmallow.md)

[Walk away in fear through a hole in the wall](../../explore-outside/explore-outside.md)