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@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ <h1>Time Zone Names</h1>
 
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       <p>
-        The normative intention of this section is that an implementation must support UTC and a local time zone, which may also be UTC, or a named time zone like `"Europe/London"`, or an offset time zone like `"+01:00"`; and that the local time zone must in any case be consistent with the time zone offsets that can be determined using `Date.prototype.getTimezoneOffset()`, `Date.prototype.toString()`, and `Date.prototype.toTimeString()`.
+        The normative intention of this section is that an implementation must support UTC and a local time zone, which may also be UTC, or a named time zone like *"Europe/London"*, or an offset time zone like *"+01:00"*; and that the local time zone must in any case be consistent with the time zone offsets that can be determined using `Date.prototype.getTimezoneOffset()`, `Date.prototype.toString()`, and `Date.prototype.toTimeString()`.
         The exact formal definition of "local time zone" is still to be determined.
       </p>
     </emu-note>
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@ <h1>Time Zone Names</h1>
       In addition, implementations may support any number of other built-in time zones.
     </p>
     <p>
-      Built-in time zones may be <dfn>named</dfn> time zones, represented by Strings for which IsValidTimeZoneName returns *true*.
-      They may also be <dfn>offset</dfn> time zones, represented by Strings that conform to the syntax of |TimeZoneNumericUTCOffset|.
+      Built-in time zones may be <dfn>named time zones</dfn>, represented by Strings for which IsValidTimeZoneName returns *true*.
+      They may also be <dfn>offset time zones</dfn>, represented by Strings that conform to the syntax of |TimeZoneNumericUTCOffset|.
     <p>
       <emu-xref href="#sec-temporal-timezone-constructor">The `Temporal.TimeZone` constructor</emu-xref>, when called with the name of a built-in time zone as the argument, will return a valid `Temporal.TimeZone` object.
       When called with any other string, it will throw a *RangeError* exception.
@@ -75,7 +75,8 @@ <h1>CanonicalizeTimeZoneName ( _timeZone_ )</h1>
       <p>
         CanonicalizeTimeZoneName may only be called with a _timeZone_ parameter that is a valid time zone name according to IsValidTimeZoneName.
       </p>
-      <p>The minimum implementation of CanonicalizeTimeZoneName, supporting only the *"UTC"* time zone, performs the following steps when called:
+      <p>
+        The minimum implementation of CanonicalizeTimeZoneName, supporting only the *"UTC"* time zone, performs the following steps when called:
       </p>
 
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