Improved workshop setup

content/en/workshop-setup/1-swipe.md

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-Please note, **SWiPE does not** provision EC2 instances - these are provisioned using Splunk Show.
+**SWiPE does not** provision EC2 instances - these are provisioned using Splunk Show.
 
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 ![SWiPE](../images/swipe.png)
 
 **SWiPE** will configure the following:
 
-- Create and invite users to the Org. Create a `.csv` file containing the e-mail addresses (one per line) **or** copy and paste e-mail addresses (one per line).
+- Create and invite users to the Org.
+  - Create a `.csv` file containing the e-mail addresses (one per line) **or** copy and paste e-mail addresses (one per line).
 - Create a team and add users to the team.
 - Create tokens for:
   - INGEST
   - API
   - RUM
-  - HEC URL
-  - HEC Token
 
-  You will need to make a copy of these to provision the EC2 instances in Splunk Show.
+**SWiPE** will also provide a HEC Token and HEC URL for dedicated workshop Splunk Cloud environments. If you wish to use a different Splunk Cloud environment, you will need to provide a HEC Token and HEC URL for that environment in Splunk Show.
+
+You will need to make a copy of the above to provision the workshop instances in Splunk Show.

content/en/workshop-setup/2-splunk-show.md

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 ![Splunk Show](../images/splunk-show.png)
 
-Please visit [**Splunk Show**](https://show.splunk.com/template/262/?type=workshop) to provision your EC2 environment(s). Select the desired **Content Type** as follows:
+Please visit [**Splunk Show**](https://show.splunk.com/template/262/?type=workshop) to provision your workshop instance(s).
+
+Select the desired **Content Type** as follows:
 
 - _Default (for interactive workshop)_ - select this if your audience is technical and wants hands-on experience installing OpenTelemetry and deploying applications.
   - Select either Normal Workshop, Private Event or Public Event. Change **Estimated Participants** to the number of attendees you expect and set the same value in **O11y Shop Quantity**. This will provision the correct number of EC2 instances. It is recommended that you over-provision by 10% - 20% to allow for any last-minute attendees.

content/en/workshop-setup/3-clean-up.md

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 ## Workshop Clean-up
 
-Once you have completed your workshop session please remember to go back and clean up the environment using **SWiPE**. Also, ensure your EC2 instances are spun down to save costs.
+Once you have completed your workshop session please remember to go back and clean up the environment using **SWiPE**. Also, ensure your workshop instances are deleted to save costs.
 
 **SWiPE** will complete the following:
 
@@ -16,6 +16,6 @@ Once you have completed your workshop session please remember to go back and cle
 
 ![Delete Workshop](../images/delete-workshop.png)
 
-**SWiPE** also provides some advanced features for deleting tokens and detectors etc., but this must be used with caution.
+**SWiPE** also provides some advanced features for deleting tokens and detectors etc., and these must be used with caution.
 
 **Happy Workshopping!**

content/en/workshop-setup/4-org-configuration.md

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 ## Log Observer Connect
 
+The workshops require a Log Observer Connect configuration to be completed. This is required to be able to send logs from the workshop instances to Splunk Cloud/Enterprise.
+
 ![Log Observer Connect](../images/log-observer-connect.png)
 
 ## Log Field Aliasing
 
+Log Field Aliasing configuration is required to ensure Related Content works correctly in the Splunk Observability Cloud UI. Configure as per the following:
+
 ![Log Field Aliasing](../images/log-field-aliasing.png)
 
 ## APM MetricSets
 
+APM MetricSets need to be configured for the tags in the screenshot below.
 ![APM MetricSets](../images/apm-metricsets.png)

content/en/workshop-setup/_index.md

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 title: Workshop Setup
+weight: 99
 linkTitle: Workshop Setup
 hidden: true
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-## Available Workshop Orgs
+Welcome to the Observability Workshop Setup Guide. This guide will walk you through the steps required to set up your workshop environments.
 
-The following Organizations are used for running Observability Workshops. They have all the features enabled to successfully run any of the available workshops.
+## Existing Workshop Orgs
+
+The following Organizations can be used for running Observability Workshops. They have all the features enabled to successfully run any of the available workshops:
 
 - CoE Workshop EMEA [EU0]
 - Observability Workshop EMEA [EU0]
 - Observability Workshop AMER [US1]
 - APAC-O11y-Workshop [US1]
 
-It is also possible to create workshop environments in any Trial Org. Please note, the following features are not available in Trial Orgs by default and must be enabled:
+## Trial Orgs
+
+It is also possible to create workshop environments in any trial Org. A default trial provides 25 hosts, 25 APM hosts and 25 x 10k RUM sessions per month. Please note, the following features are not available in Trial Orgs by default and must be enabled:
 
 - Synthetic Monitoring
 
+Also, a Splunk Cloud/Enterprise environment is required to be able to send logs. In Splunk Cloud/Enterprise make sure an index exists called **splunk4rookies-workshop**. A Log Observer Connect configuration will also need to be completed.
+
 The following Orgs are blacklisted and cannot be used for running workshops:
 
 - EU Splunk Show [EU0]