Chainlink Functions Edits

src/content/chainlink-functions/getting-started.mdx

@@ -78,35 +78,151 @@ You will test on Polygon Mumbai, so you must have an Ethereum web3 wallet with e
 
    <ClickToZoom src="/images/chainlink-functions/getting-started/deploy.jpg" />
 
-1. After you confirm the transaction, the contract address appears in the **Deployed Contracts** list. Copy the contract address.
+1. After you confirm the transaction, the contract address appears in the **Deployed Contracts** list. Copy the contract address and save it for later. You will use this address with a Functions Subscription.
 
    <ClickToZoom src="/images/chainlink-functions/getting-started/deployed-contracts.jpg" />
 
 ### Create a subscription
 
-Follow the [Managing Functions Subscriptions](/chainlink-functions/resources/subscriptions#create-a-subscription) guide to accept the Chainlink Functions Terms of Service (ToS), create a subscription, fund it, then add your consumer contract address to it.
+You use a Chainlink Functions subscription to pay for, manage, and track Functions requests.
 
-You can find the Chainlink Functions Subscription Manager at [functions.chain.link](https://functions.chain.link/).
+1. Go to [functions.chain.link](https://functions.chain.link/).
 
-## Run the example
+1. Click **Connect wallet**:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/frontend-landing.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription landing page"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. Read and accept the Chainlink Foundation Terms of Service. Then click **MetaMask**.
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/accept-CL-foundation-tos.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions accept ToS"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. Make sure your wallet is connected to the _Polygon Mumbai_ testnet. If not, click the network name in the top right corner of the page and select _Polygon Mumbai_.
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/wallet-connected-polygon-mumbai.jpg"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription landing page"
+   />
+
+1. Click **Create Subscription**:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/frontend-landing-wallet-connected.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription landing page"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. Provide an email address and an optional subscription name:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/create-subscription.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions create subscription"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. The first time you interact with the Subscription Manager using your EOA, you must accept the Terms of Service (ToS). A MetaMask popup appears and you are asked to accept the ToS:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/acceptTos.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions accept ToS"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. After you approve the ToS, another MetaMask popup appears, and you are asked to approve the subscription creation:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/approve-create-subscription.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions approve subscriptions creation"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. After the subscription is created, MetaMask prompts you to sign a message that links the subscription name and email address to your subscription:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/sign-message-tos.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions sign message ToS"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/sign-message-tos-metamask.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions sign message ToS MetaMask"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
 
-The example is hardcoded to communicate with Chainlink Functions on Polygon Mumbai. Read the [Examine the code](#examine-the-code) section for a detailed description of all components.
+### Fund your subscription
 
-To run the example:
+1. After the subscription is created, the Functions UI prompts you to fund your subscription. Click **Add funds**:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/subscription-created.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription created"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. For this example, add 2 LINK and click **Add funds**:
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/subscription-created-add-funds.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription add funds"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+### Add a consumer to your subscription
+
+1. After you fund your subscription, add your consumer to it. Specify the address for the consumer contract that you deployed earlier and click **Add consumer**. MetaMask prompts you to confirm the transaction.
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/subscription-created-add-consumer.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription add consumer"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/subscription-created-add-consumer-2.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription add consumer"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+1. Subscription creation and configuration is complete. You can always see the details of your subscription again at [functions.chain.link](https://functions.chain.link):
+
+   <ClickToZoom
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/subscription-details-after-creation.jpg"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions subscription details"
+     style="max-width: 70%;"
+   />
+
+## Run the example
+
+The example is hardcoded to communicate with Chainlink Functions on Polygon Mumbai. After this example is run, you can examine the code and see a detailed description of all components.
 
 1.  In Remix under the **Deploy & Run Transactions** tab, expand your contract in the **Deployed Contracts** section.
 1.  Expand the `sendRequest` function to display its parameters.
-1.  Fill in the `subscriptionId` with your subscription ID and `args` with `[1]`, then click **transact** button.
+1.  Fill in the `subscriptionId` with your subscription ID and `args` with `[1]`. You can find your subscription ID on the Chainlink Functions Subscription Manager at [functions.chain.link](https://functions.chain.link/). The `[1]` value for `args` specifies which argument in the response will be retrieved.
+
+1.  Click the **transact** button.
 
     <ClickToZoom src="/images/chainlink-functions/getting-started/send-request.jpg" />
 
 1.  Wait for the request to be fulfilled. You can monitor the status of your request on the Chainlink Functions Subscription Manager.
+
     <ClickToZoom src="/images/chainlink-functions/getting-started/request-fulfilled.jpg" />
-1.  Once the status is _Success_, check the character name: In Remix, under the **Deploy & Run Transactions** tab, click on the `character` function, and you'll get the name of your character.
+
+1.  Refresh the Functions UI to get the latest request status.
+
+1.  After the status is _Success_, check the character name. In Remix, under the **Deploy & Run Transactions** tab, click the `character` function. If the transaction and request ran correctly, you will see the name of your character in the response.
 
     <ClickToZoom src="/images/chainlink-functions/getting-started/character.jpg" />
 
-Chainlink Functions is capable of much more than just computation. Try one of the [Tutorials](/chainlink-functions/tutorials) to see examples that can GET and POST to public APIs, securely handle API secrets, handle custom responses, and query multiple APIs.
+Chainlink Functions is capable of much more than just retrieving data. Try one of the [Tutorials](/chainlink-functions/tutorials) to see examples that can GET and POST to public APIs, securely handle API secrets, handle custom responses, and query multiple APIs.
 
 ## Examine the code
 

src/content/chainlink-functions/resources/subscriptions.mdx

@@ -20,20 +20,22 @@ Chainlink Functions is offered "as is" and "as available" without conditions or
 
 The Chainlink Functions Subscription Manager is available [here](https://functions.chain.link/). The Functions Subscription Manager lets you create a subscription, add consumers to it, remove consumers from it, fund it with LINK, and delete it.
 
-When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then click on _connect wallet_.
+When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then click _connect wallet_.
 
 ## Subscriptions
 
+You use a Chainlink Functions subscription to pay for, manage, and track Functions requests.
+
 ### Create a subscription
 
-1. Open the landing page and click on _Create Subscription_:
+1. Open [functions.chain.link](https://functions.chain.link/) and click _Create Subscription_:
 
    <ClickToZoom
-     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/frontend-landing.jpg"
+     src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/frontend-landing-wallet-connected.jpg"
      alt="Chainlink Functions subscription landing page"
    />
 
-1. You are asked to provide an optional email address and subscription name:
+1. Provide an email address and an optional subscription name:
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/create-subscription.jpg"
@@ -47,14 +49,14 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
      alt="Chainlink Functions accept ToS"
    />
 
-1. When you approve the ToS, a Metamask popup appears, and you are asked to approve the subscription creation:
+1. When you approve the ToS, a MetaMask popup appears that asks you to approve the subscription creation:
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/approve-create-subscription.jpg"
      alt="Chainlink Functions approve subscriptions creation"
    />
 
-1. Once the subscription is created, you are asked to sign a message in MetaMask to link the subscription name and email address to your subscription:
+1. After the subscription is created, you are asked to sign a message in MetaMask to link the subscription name and email address to your subscription:
 
 <ClickToZoom
   src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/sign-message-tos.jpg"
@@ -65,10 +67,10 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
 <ClickToZoom
   src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/sign-message-tos-metamask.jpg"
-  alt="Chainlink Functions sign message ToS Metamask"
+  alt="Chainlink Functions sign message ToS MetaMask"
 />
 
-1. After the subscription is created, you can fund it with LINK:
+1. After the subscription is created, fund it with LINK:
 
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      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/subscription-created-add-funds.jpg"
@@ -96,7 +98,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
 ### Fund a Subscription
 
-1. Open your subscription details and click on _Actions_ then click on _Fund subscription_:
+1. Open your subscription details and click _Actions_ then click _Fund subscription_:
 
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      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-click-fund.jpg"
@@ -110,7 +112,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
      alt="Chainlink Functions add fund to your subscription"
    />
 
-1. A Metamask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction. After you confirm the transaction, a confirmation screen appears:
+1. A MetaMask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction. After you confirm the transaction, a confirmation screen appears:
 
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      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-funded.jpg"
@@ -119,7 +121,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
 ### Add a consumer contract to a Subscription
 
-1. Open your subscription details and click on _Add Consumer_:
+1. Open your subscription details and click _Add Consumer_:
 
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      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-add-consumer.jpg"
@@ -133,7 +135,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
      alt="Chainlink Functions provider consumer address"
    />
 
-1. A Metamask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction. After you confirm the transaction, a confirmation screen appears:
+1. A MetaMask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction. After you confirm the transaction, a confirmation screen appears:
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-consumer-added.jpg"
@@ -142,14 +144,14 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
 ### Remove a consumer contract from a Subscription
 
-1. Open your subscription details and click on the consumer you want to remove, then _Remove Consumer_:
+1. Open your subscription details and click the consumer you want to remove, then _Remove Consumer_:
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-remove-consumer.jpg"
      alt="Chainlink Functions remove consumer"
    />
 
-1. A Metamask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction.
+1. A MetaMask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction.
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-remove-consumer-confirm.jpg"
@@ -158,7 +160,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-remove-consumer-confirm2.jpg"
-     alt="Chainlink Functions confirm the removal of the consumer in Metamask"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions confirm the removal of the consumer in MetaMask"
    />
 
 1. After you confirm the transaction, a confirmation screen appears:
@@ -172,7 +174,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
 **Note**: You cannot cancel a subscription if there are in-flight requests. In-flight requests are requests that still need to be fulfilled.
 
-1. Open your subscription details, click on _Actions_, then _Cancel subscription_:
+1. Open your subscription details, click _Actions_, then _Cancel subscription_:
 
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      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-cancel.jpg"
@@ -186,7 +188,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
      alt="Chainlink Functions cancel subscription"
    />
 
-1. A Metamask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction.
+1. A MetaMask popup appears, and you are asked to confirm the transaction.
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-cancel-confirm.jpg"
@@ -195,7 +197,7 @@ When you connect to the Subscription Manager, choose the correct network, then c
 
    <ClickToZoom
      src="/images/chainlink-functions/tutorials/subscription/your-subscription-cancel-confirm2.jpg"
-     alt="Chainlink Functions confirm the removal of the subscription in Metamask"
+     alt="Chainlink Functions confirm the removal of the subscription in MetaMask"
    />
 
 1. After you confirm the transaction, a confirmation screen appears: