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This PR is an editorial pass of the intro. The aim is to provide a shorter, more clear text. This PR does not (really) modify the subsections of the intro, however, we could consider if sec 1.1. and maybe also the others should simply be removed...?
mirjak
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Feb 4, 2025
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Actually we wouldn't be able to just remove section 1.2 (path ID) and 1.3 entirely (multiple packet spaces), however, we could move the needed text somewhere else. |
qdeconinck
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Feb 25, 2025
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Having compared side-by-side the current version and this PR, I think this text nicely summarises the previous text without losing any relevant information. It also now clearly states that paths are created by the client, which was somewhat unclear in the previous draft. I see that the introduction assumes the proposed ToC of #489 -- which is fine for me.
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This PR is an editorial pass of the intro. The aim is to provide a shorter, more clear text. This PR does not (really) modify the subsections of the intro, however, we could consider if sec 1.1. and maybe also the others should simply be removed...?