Merge pull request #923 from ann0see/shortenLandingPage

Apply some suggestions from #843

_layouts/mainhomepage.html

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ <h1>Jamulus</h1>
           <a href="wiki/Getting-Started" id="get_started_btn_top">{{ page.mTGetStartedNow }}</a>
         </div>
         <div class="fx-col-100-xs" id="quick_dl_container">
-          {{ page.mTDownloadNow }} <a href="{{ site.download_root_link }}{{ site.download_file_names.windows }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-win">Windows</a>, <a href="{{ site.download_root_link }}{{ site.download_file_names.mac }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-mac">Mac</a>, <a href="{{ site.download_root_link }}{{ site.download_file_names.deb-gui }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-deb">Debian/Ubuntu</a> &amp; <a href="{{ site.download_overview_link }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-other">{{ page.mTOtherPlatforms }}</a>.
+          {{ page.mTDownloadNow }} <a href="{{ site.download_root_link }}{{ site.download_file_names.windows }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-win">Windows</a>, <a href="{{ site.download_root_link }}{{ site.download_file_names.mac }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-mac">macOS</a>, <a href="{{ site.download_root_link }}{{ site.download_file_names.deb-gui }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-deb">Debian/Ubuntu</a> and <a href="{{ site.download_overview_link }}" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" class="os-other">{{ page.mTOtherPlatforms }}</a>.
         </div>
       </div>
     </div>

wiki/en/misc/1-index.html

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 ldjAppCategory: "Music"
 ldjSlogan: "Play music online. With friends. For free."
 ldjCreator: "Volker Fischer and contributors"
-metadescription: "Jamulus is open source software that lets musicians perform music, rehearse or just jam together, all in real time over the Internet."
+metadescription: "Jamulus is free and open source software that lets musicians perform music, rehearse or jam together, in real time over the Internet."
 mAltProgIcon: "Jamulus icon"
 mTSlogan: "Play music online. With friends. For free."
 mTGetStartedNow: "Get started now!"
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
   <div class="fx-col-100-xs">
     <div itemprop="abstract">
       <h2>What is Jamulus?</h2>
-       Jamulus is for playing, rehearsing, or just jamming with your friends, your band or just anyone you find online. With high quality, low-latency sound on a normal broadband connection, it's easy to play together remotely and in time. <a href="wiki/Getting-Started" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">Download it here</a>!
+       Jamulus lets you play, rehearse, or jam with your friends, your band, or anyone you find online. Play together remotely in time with high quality, low-latency sound on a normal broadband connection. <a href="wiki/Getting-Started" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">Download it here</a>!
     </div>
   </div>
 </div>
@@ -31,24 +31,24 @@ <h2>What is Jamulus?</h2>
 <div class="fx-row fx-row-center-xs">
   <div class="fx-col-100-xs fx-col-50-l">
      <h2>Jamulus worldwide</h2>
-    All over the world Jamulus allows huge choirs to rehearse, loud rock bands to play, and brings folk and classical musicians together. It's being used for remote music lessons,
-    in schools and universities, in private and in public. Even just for the spoken word – all in real time on the Internet, as if you were there in person.
+    All over the world Jamulus allows choirs to rehearse and rock bands to play. Jamulus brings folk and classical musicians together. It's being used for remote music lessons,
+    in schools and universities, in private and in public — all in real time on the Internet, as if you were there in person.
     <h2>Help needed?</h2>
     <p>
-      Have a look at the <a href="wiki/Getting-Started" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">documentation</a>. Especially consider the <a href="wiki/Client-Troubleshooting"
+      Check out the <a href="wiki/Getting-Started" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">documentation</a> and consider the <a href="wiki/Client-Troubleshooting"
         target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">troubleshooting section</a>!
       You can also ask on the <a href="https://github.com/jamulussoftware/jamulus/discussions" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">forums</a>.
     </p>
   </div>
   <div class="fx-col-100-xs fx-col-50-l">
     <h2>Want to get involved?</h2>
     <p>
-    Ideas? Found a bug? Want to contribute some code or help translating into your language? Since Jamulus is <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.en.html" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" title="What is free software?">free and open source software</a> (FOSS) licensed under the <a href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/old-licenses/gpl-2.0.en.html" title="GNU General Public License, version 2" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">GPL</a>, you can help us!<br>
+    Ideas? Found a bug? Want to contribute some code or help <a href="https://github.com/jamulussoftware/jamulus/blob/main/docs/TRANSLATING.md" title="Documentation for translation Jamulus">translating</a> Jamulus into your language? Since Jamulus is <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.en.html" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" title="What is free software?">free and open source software</a> (FOSS) licensed under the <a href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/old-licenses/gpl-2.0.en.html" title="GNU General Public License, version 2" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">GPL</a>, you can help us!<br>
     Take a look at our <a href="wiki/Contribution">contribution guidelines</a> to find out how. Everybody is welcome!
     </p>
     <p>
     <em>
-      For detailed information about how Jamulus hacks the space-time continuum to produce a near-perfect 5th dimension of collaborative sound, see <a
+      For detailed information on how Jamulus works, see <a
       href="/PerformingBandRehearsalsontheInternetWithJamulus.pdf">this paper by Volker Fischer (PDF)</a>.
     </em>
     </p>