Added myself as an author, let me know if this is appropriate or not - I'm just here to help, I’m happy to conference call to talk through the changes.
-Fixed a bunch of spelling and typo errors - might have added some more, hope not!
-Changed several sentences to be concise, you may want to check the spelling again, I've been at this a while.
-Added roles and subgroups to improvements under summary it is mentioned further through but not up there where it should have been
-Updated motivation wording to include statements from Tony Smith from 3rd March 2022 community zoom meeting with Helium reprehensive, also to recognise existing work
-Updated Stakeholders removed a title to keep with formatting of HIP
-Added how improvement will be achieved to first line of the detailed explanation, note this will mean the proposal is the create the Terms of Reference using the details as the minizine baseline rather then make the proposal the TOR.
-Updated recommendation to include makers and consumers rather than just operators (following Tony Smith's words as for mentioned).
-Removed part about contracts, not sure what you mean but I’m not legal so if it’s something on that…
-We may want to discuss the definition of an independent chair!
-Removed "and remaining committee members" from decision on conflict of interest, the TOR will have to describe what occurs if the chair has a conflict of interest.
-Added quorum statement, feel free to change and look at proxy use.
-Updated titles to use the role words instead of expected to be more consistent with a TOR and the improvements mentioned in summary.
-Added to chair and member roles some nominal common TOR ones
-Updated Drawbacks statement, no I didn’t add one about my conversation with our friendly discord community 😉
-Added to Rationale on reduced confidence statement as per a few comments from Helium discord.
-Added to the todo for out of scope and an unresolved question. Let me know if you can answer the unresolved question as IoT has a lot of inherent security issues.

Gathered feedback #1 and my feedback on the HIP

Bullet points incorrect

Correct typos previously identified. Have NOT changed diagrams per my notes, only MarkDown.

New PoC data reporting diagram - correct "Decentralized Oracales"