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[Remote clusters] Update copy #60382

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This PR updates copy in the remote clusters UI.

Related to #59221

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Pinging @elastic/es-ui (Team:Elasticsearch UI)

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Intro sentence

Add a remote cluster that connects to seed nodes or a single proxy request.

Proxy address

The address to use for remote connections.

Node connections

The number of gateway nodes to use for requests. (Not sure about this, but want to get away from ending with the word "to")

Tooltip:

Edit this cluster to update the deprecated settings.

Server name (optional)

  • Add optional to label
  • Would it be good to include an example as placeholder text
  • Label is server name but talks about hostname
  • Let's discuss some ways to reduce the text

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alisonelizabeth commented Mar 18, 2020 •
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@gchaps thanks for the review! I've updated the copy per your suggestions in 4d28412.

The number of gateway nodes to use for requests. (Not sure about this, but want to get away from ending with the word "to")

I changed this to: "The number of gateway nodes to connect to for this cluster." WDYT?

Server name (optional)
Add optional to label
Would it be good to include an example as placeholder text
Label is server name but talks about hostname
Let's discuss some ways to reduce the text

I added (optional) to the label. I also shortened the text a little bit, but could probably still be improved. Here is the ES documentation on it: https://www.elastic.co/guide/en/elasticsearch/reference/master/modules-remote-clusters.html#remote-cluster-proxy-settings. What do you think about linking to this in the help text?

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gchaps commented Mar 18, 2020

Good suggestions, @alisonelizabeth.

I like this text:

The number of gateway nodes to connect to for this cluster.

I shortened this text a bit and added the "Learn more" link.

A string sent in the server_name field of the TLS Server Name Indication extension if TLS is enabled. Learn more.

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LGTM

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@alisonelizabeth alisonelizabeth merged commit ee6bb64 into elastic:master Mar 19, 2020
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Merge branch 'master' of github.com:elastic/kibana into refactor/cons…
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* 'master' of github.com:elastic/kibana: (47 commits)
  [Remote clusters] Update copy (elastic#60382)
  Sort by name when fetching alerts and connectors (elastic#60506)
  Make slack param validation handle empty messages (elastic#60468)
  [Alerting] Adds navigation by consumer and alert type to alerting (elastic#58997)
  Introduce search interceptor (elastic#60523)
  [ML] Add functional tests for file data visualizer (elastic#60413)
  [APM] Optimize service map query (elastic#60412)
  [SIEM][Detection Engine] Adds lists feature flag and list values to the REST interfaces
  Enhancement/update esdocs datasource (elastic#59512)
  [junit] only include stdout in report for failures (elastic#60530)
  Update dependency nock to v12 (elastic#60422)
  upgrade execa to get stdout/stderr in error messages (elastic#60537)
  skip flaky suite (elastic#60471)
  [Ingest] Agent Config Details - Data sources list ui (elastic#60429)
  [SIEM] Create ML Rules (elastic#58053)
  skip flaky suite (elastic#60559)
  fix agent type (elastic#60554)
  Fixed default message for index threshold includes both threshold values (elastic#60545)
  [Ingest] Add support for `yaml` field types (elastic#60440)
  Solved the issue for a GROUP BY expression validation (elastic#60558)
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Merge branch 'master' into alerting/tls-warning
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* master: (39 commits)
  [SIEM][CASE]  Configuration page action bar (elastic#60608)
  [Remote clusters] Update copy (elastic#60382)
  Sort by name when fetching alerts and connectors (elastic#60506)
  Make slack param validation handle empty messages (elastic#60468)
  [Alerting] Adds navigation by consumer and alert type to alerting (elastic#58997)
  Introduce search interceptor (elastic#60523)
  [ML] Add functional tests for file data visualizer (elastic#60413)
  [APM] Optimize service map query (elastic#60412)
  [SIEM][Detection Engine] Adds lists feature flag and list values to the REST interfaces
  Enhancement/update esdocs datasource (elastic#59512)
  [junit] only include stdout in report for failures (elastic#60530)
  Update dependency nock to v12 (elastic#60422)
  upgrade execa to get stdout/stderr in error messages (elastic#60537)
  skip flaky suite (elastic#60471)
  [Ingest] Agent Config Details - Data sources list ui (elastic#60429)
  [SIEM] Create ML Rules (elastic#58053)
  skip flaky suite (elastic#60559)
  fix agent type (elastic#60554)
  Fixed default message for index threshold includes both threshold values (elastic#60545)
  [Ingest] Add support for `yaml` field types (elastic#60440)
  ...
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[Remote clusters] Update copy (#60382) (#60618)
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