Grammatical edits

e107_languages/English/lan_error.php

@@ -13,11 +13,11 @@
 define("LAN_ERROR_TITLE", "Oops!");
 
 define("LAN_ERROR_1", "Error 401 - Authentication Failed");
-define("LAN_ERROR_2", "The URL you've requested requires a correct username and password. Either you entered an incorrect username/password, or your browser doesn't support this feature.");
+define("LAN_ERROR_2", "The URL you've requested requires a username and password. Either you entered one incorrectly, or your browser doesn't support this feature.");
 define("LAN_ERROR_3", "Please inform the administrator of the referring page if you think this error page has been shown by mistake.");
 
 define("LAN_ERROR_4", "Error 403 - Access forbidden");
-define("LAN_ERROR_5", "You are not permitted to retrieve the URL or link you requested.");
+define("LAN_ERROR_5", "You are not permitted to retrieve the document or page you requested.");
 define("LAN_ERROR_6", "Please inform the administrator of the referring page if you think this error page has been shown by mistake.");
 
 define("LAN_ERROR_7", "Error 404 - Document Not Found");
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 define("LAN_ERROR_34", "Unknown error! Please inform the site administrator you saw this:");
 
 define("LAN_ERROR_35", "Error 400 - Bad Request");
-define("LAN_ERROR_36", "There is a formatting error in the web page you are trying to access.");
+define("LAN_ERROR_36", "There is a formatting error in the URL you are trying to access.");
 define("LAN_ERROR_37", "Error Icon");
 define("LAN_ERROR_38", "Sorry, but the site is unavailable due to a temporary fault");
 define("LAN_ERROR_39", "Please try again in a few minutes");

e107_languages/English/lan_fpw.php

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
 define("LAN_02", "Sorry, unable to send email - please contact the main site administrator.");
 define("LAN_03", "Password Reset");
-define("LAN_05", "To reset your password please enter the following information");
+define("LAN_05", "To reset your password, please enter the following information");
 define("LAN_06", "Attempted password reset");
 define("LAN_07", "Someone with IP address ");
 define("LAN_08", "attempted to reset the main admin password.");
@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@
 define("LAN_213", "That username/email address was not found in database.");
 define("LAN_214", "Unable to reset password");
 // define("LAN_216", "To validate your new password please go to the following URL ...");
-// define("LAN_217", "Your new password is now validated, you may now login using your new password.");
+// define("LAN_217", "Your new password is now validated. You may now log in using it.");
 define("LAN_218", "Your username is:");
 // define("LAN_219", "The password associated with that email address has already been reset and cannot be reset again. Please contact the site administrator for more details.");
 define("LAN_FPW1", "Username");
 // define("LAN_FPW2", "Enter code");
 // define("LAN_FPW3", "Incorrect code entered");
-define("LAN_FPW4", "A request has already been sent to reset this password, if you did not receive the email, please contact the site administrator for help.");
+define("LAN_FPW4", "A request has already been sent to reset this password.  If you did not receive the email, please contact the site administrator for help.");
 define("LAN_FPW5", "A request to reset your password for");
 define("LAN_FPW6", "An email has been sent to you with a link that will allow you to reset your password.");
 define("LAN_FPW7", "This is not a valid link to reset your password.<br />Please contact the site administrator for more details.");
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 
 
 define("LAN_FPW_100", "Forgot your password?");
-define("LAN_FPW_101", "Not to worry. Just enter your email address below and we'll send you an instruction email for recovery.");
+define("LAN_FPW_101", "Not to worry. Just enter your email address below and we'll send you an email with instructions to get it back.");
 define("LAN_FPW_102", "Reset Password");
 
 ?>

e107_languages/English/lan_login.php

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 define("LAN_LOGIN_2", "User password");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_3", "Protected server");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_4", "Please sign in"); // XXX Modified
-define("LAN_LOGIN_5", "Click here to Sign-Up");
+define("LAN_LOGIN_5", "Click here to sign up");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_6", "Not accepting new members at this time");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_7", "Enter visible code");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_8", "Remember Me");
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
 define("LAN_LOGIN_18", "Auto-ban: More than [x] failed login attempts");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_19", "> 10 failed login attempts");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_20", "You left required field(s) blank");
-define("LAN_LOGIN_21", "Incorrect login. The entered data doesn't match to a registered user. Check if you have the CAPS-LOCK key activated as logins on this site are case sensitive");
-define("LAN_LOGIN_22", "You have not activated your account. You should have received an email with instructions on how to confirm your account. If not, please click [here].");
+define("LAN_LOGIN_21", "Your login details don't match any registered user. Check if you have the CAPS-LOCK key activated, as logins on this site are case sensitive.");
+define("LAN_LOGIN_22", "You have not activated your account. You should have received an email with instructions on how to do so. If not, please click [here].");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_23", "Incorrect code entered.");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_24", "That username/password combination is already in use.");
 define("LAN_LOGIN_25", "Banned user attempted to login");

e107_languages/English/lan_signup.php

@@ -12,16 +12,16 @@
 define("PAGE_NAME", "Register");
 
 /*
-//define("LAN_103", "That username cannot be accepted as valid, please choose a different user name");
-//define("LAN_104", "That username already exists in the database, please choose a different username");
-//define("LAN_105", "The two passwords do not match");
+//define("LAN_103", "That username is invalid. Please choose a different one");
+//define("LAN_104", "That username is taken.  Please choose a different one");
+//define("LAN_105", "The two passwords don't match");
 //define("LAN_106", "That doesn"t appear to be a valid email address");
 define("LAN_108", "Registration complete");
 define("LAN_185", "You left required field(s) blank");
 // define("LAN_201", "Yes");
 // define("LAN_200", "No");
 // define("LAN_399", "Continue");
-define("LAN_407", "Please keep this email for your own information. Your password has been encrypted and cannot be retrieved if you misplace or forget it. You can however request a new password if this happens.\n\nThanks for your registration.\n\nFrom");
+define("LAN_407", "Please keep this email for your own information. Your password has been encrypted and cannot be retrieved if you misplace or forget it. You can, however, request a new password if this happens.\n\nThank you for registering.\n\nFrom");
 //define("LAN_408", "A user with that email address already exists. Please use the "forgot password" screen to retrieve your password.");
 
 //define("LAN_409", "Invalid characters in username");
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@
 
 define("LAN_EMAIL_01", "Dear");
 define("LAN_EMAIL_04", "Please keep this email for your own information.");
-define("LAN_EMAIL_05", "Your password has been encrypted and cannot be retrieved if you misplace or forget it. You can however request a new password if this happens.");
-define("LAN_EMAIL_06", "Thanks for your registration.");
+define("LAN_EMAIL_05", "Your password has been encrypted and cannot be retrieved if you misplace or forget it. You can, however, request a new password if this happens.");
+define("LAN_EMAIL_06", "Thank you for registering.");
 
 
 define("LAN_SIGNUP_1", "Min.");
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 define("LAN_SIGNUP_9", "Unable to proceed.");
 //define("LAN_SIGNUP_10", "Yes");
 define("LAN_SIGNUP_11", ".");
-define("LAN_SIGNUP_12", "please keep your username and password written down in a safe place as if lost they cannot be retrieved.");
+define("LAN_SIGNUP_12", "please keep your username and password written down in a safe place as they cannot be retrieved if you lose them.");
 define("LAN_SIGNUP_13", "You can now log in from the Login box, or from [here].");
 define("LAN_SIGNUP_14", "here");
 define("LAN_SIGNUP_15", "Please contact the main site admin");

e107_languages/English/lan_sitedown.php

@@ -11,5 +11,4 @@
 */
 define("PAGE_NAME", "Site temporarily closed");
 define("LAN_SITEDOWN_00", "is temporarily closed");
-define("LAN_SITEDOWN_01", "We have temporarily closed the site for some essential maintenance. This shouldn't take too long - please check back soon, apologies for the inconvenience.");
 ?>