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  • New Features

    • Enhanced boolKey codec with new methods for JSON encoding/decoding, string conversion, and multipart key handling.
    • Improved documentation for better understanding of codec functionalities.
  • Bug Fixes

    • Updated error handling in encoding and decoding processes to ensure robustness.
  • Tests

    • Introduced comprehensive tests for the UntypedValueCodec, covering encoding, decoding, JSON handling, and stringification.

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The pull request introduces enhancements to the boolKey codec in the codec package, adding several new methods for encoding, decoding, and representing boolean values. It also improves documentation for existing methods, clarifying their functionality and error handling. Additionally, a new test function is added to the codec_test.go file to validate the behavior of the UntypedValueCodec, ensuring comprehensive coverage for encoding, decoding, JSON handling, and stringification processes.

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File Change Summary
collections/codec/bool.go Added methods: EncodeJSON, DecodeJSON, Stringify, KeyType, EncodeNonTerminal, DecodeNonTerminal, SizeNonTerminal, WithName. Improved documentation for NewBoolKey, boolKey struct, Encode, and Decode methods.
collections/codec/codec_test.go Introduced TestUntypedValueCodec function with sub-tests for encoding, decoding, JSON encoding/decoding, and stringifying behaviors of UntypedValueCodec.

Possibly related PRs

  • docs(collections): add comments for funcs #22214: This PR adds comments for functions in quad.go and triple.go, which is related to the main PR's focus on enhancing documentation for the boolKey codec methods in bool.go. Both PRs aim to improve code readability and maintainability through better documentation.

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Actionable comments posted: 2

🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (5)
collections/codec/codec_test.go (4)

12-13: Consider improving readability of codec creation

The setup code creates the necessary codec for testing, but the long chain of function calls might be hard to read. Consider breaking it down into multiple lines or using intermediate variables for better readability.

Example refactor:

stringKeyCodec := NewStringKeyCodec[string]()
keyCodec := KeyCodec[string](stringKeyCodec)
valueCodec := KeyToValueCodec(keyCodec)
stringValueCodec := ValueCodec[string](valueCodec)
vc := NewUntypedValueCodec(stringValueCodec)

31-46: LGTM: Well-implemented "json encode/decode" sub-test with a minor suggestion

The "json encode/decode" sub-test is well-structured and consistent with the previous sub-test:

  • It covers both error and success cases for JSON operations.
  • The assertions use the require package as recommended.

Minor suggestion: Consider adding a test case for decoding invalid JSON to ensure robust error handling.

Example additional test case:

// Test decoding invalid JSON
_, err = vc.DecodeJSON([]byte(`{"invalid": "json"`))
require.Error(t, err)

47-59: LGTM: Well-implemented "stringify" sub-test with a minor suggestion

The "stringify" sub-test is well-structured and consistent with the previous sub-tests:

  • It covers both error and success cases for stringification.
  • The assertions use the require package as recommended.

Minor suggestion: For consistency with the other sub-tests, consider adding a case to test stringification of an empty string.

Example additional test case:

// Test stringification of an empty string
s, err = vc.Stringify("")
require.NoError(t, err)
require.Equal(t, "", s)

9-59: Overall: Well-implemented tests with room for minor enhancements

The TestUntypedValueCodec function provides comprehensive testing for the UntypedValueCodec:

  • The structure follows Go best practices and the Uber Go Style Guide.
  • Sub-tests cover encoding/decoding, JSON operations, and stringification.
  • Both success and error cases are tested.

Consider the following enhancements:

  1. Improve readability of the codec creation in the setup.
  2. Add a test case for decoding invalid JSON in the "json encode/decode" sub-test.
  3. Test stringification of an empty string in the "stringify" sub-test.
  4. Consider adding tests for edge cases, such as very large strings or special characters.

These additions would further strengthen the test suite and ensure robust behavior of the UntypedValueCodec.

collections/codec/bool.go (1)

72-75: Simplify type conversion in Stringify method

In the Stringify method, the type conversion (bool)(key) is unnecessary since key is already of a type that derives from bool due to the type constraint T ~bool. You can simplify the code by removing the redundant type conversion.

Apply this diff to simplify the code:

 func (b boolKey[T]) Stringify(key T) string {
-	return strconv.FormatBool((bool)(key))
+	return strconv.FormatBool(bool(key))
 }
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collections/codec/bool.go (1)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.

collections/codec/codec_test.go (2)

Pattern **/*.go: Review the Golang code for conformity with the Uber Golang style guide, highlighting any deviations.


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🔇 Additional comments (12)
collections/codec/codec_test.go (2)

9-11: LGTM: Well-documented test function

The function declaration and comments follow Go naming conventions and the Uber Go Style Guide. The comments provide a clear description of the test function's purpose.


15-30: LGTM: Well-structured "encode/decode" sub-test

The "encode/decode" sub-test is well-implemented:

  • It covers both error and success cases.
  • It follows the table-driven test pattern recommended by the Uber Go Style Guide.
  • The assertions use the require package as recommended.

Good job on thorough testing of the encoding and decoding functionality.

collections/codec/bool.go (10)

9-13: Well-documented and correctly implemented NewBoolKey function

The NewBoolKey function is well-documented, clearly explaining its purpose and the type constraints. The implementation correctly returns a new boolKey codec instance.


15-16: Clear implementation of the boolKey struct

The boolKey struct correctly implements the KeyCodec interface for boolean values, and the documentation provides a clear understanding of its role.


31-49: Robust Decode method with proper error handling

The Decode method correctly checks the buffer length and handles invalid input gracefully. The switch statement appropriately distinguishes between valid and invalid byte values, ensuring accurate decoding of boolean values.


52-55: Accurate implementation of the Size method

The Size method correctly returns the constant size required to encode a boolean value, which is 1 byte.


57-61: Correct use of JSON marshaling in EncodeJSON

The EncodeJSON method appropriately uses json.Marshal to convert the boolean value into its JSON representation. This ensures consistency with standard JSON encoding practices.


63-69: Proper JSON decoding in DecodeJSON

The DecodeJSON method correctly uses json.Unmarshal to decode the JSON-encoded data into a boolean value. The use of a variable of type T maintains consistency with the generic type constraint.


78-80: Clear implementation of the KeyType method

The KeyType method correctly returns the string identifier "bool" for the key type, aiding in identification and debugging.


89-92: Correct delegation in DecodeNonTerminal

The DecodeNonTerminal method appropriately delegates to the Decode method, ensuring consistency in decoding behavior for multipart keys.


95-98: Consistent implementation of SizeNonTerminal

The SizeNonTerminal method correctly delegates to the Size method, maintaining consistency in size calculation for multipart keys.


101-104: Proper implementation of WithName method

The WithName method correctly wraps the current codec with a name, returning a NamedKeyCodec. This aids in identification and enhances usability.

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// EncodeNonTerminal is used in multipart keys. It behaves the same as the regular Encode method,
// writing the boolean value into the buffer.
func (b boolKey[T]) EncodeNonTerminal(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
return b.Encode(buffer, key)
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⚠️ Potential issue

Ensure buffer length is checked in EncodeNonTerminal

Since EncodeNonTerminal relies on the Encode method, it inherits the same potential issue where an insufficient buffer length could cause a panic. After fixing the buffer length check in the Encode method, EncodeNonTerminal will also be safeguarded.

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// Encode encodes the boolean value into the first byte of the buffer.
// If the value is true, the buffer gets the byte value `0x1`, otherwise `0x0`.
// It returns the number of bytes written (always 1) or an error if something goes wrong.
func (b boolKey[T]) Encode(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
if key {
buffer[0] = 0x1
buffer[0] = 0x1 // Encode true as 0x1.
return 1, nil
}
buffer[0] = 0x0
buffer[0] = 0x0 // Encode false as 0x0.
return 1, nil
}
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⚠️ Potential issue

Add buffer length check in Encode method to prevent potential panic

In the Encode method, there's no check to ensure that the buffer has sufficient length before writing to buffer[0]. This can lead to an index out of range panic if the buffer is less than one byte long. Please add a length check to ensure len(buffer) >= 1 before accessing buffer[0].

Apply this diff to add the buffer length check:

 func (b boolKey[T]) Encode(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
+	if len(buffer) < 1 {
+		return 0, fmt.Errorf("%w: buffer too small, expected at least 1 byte", ErrEncoding)
+	}
 	if key {
 		buffer[0] = 0x1 // Encode true as 0x1.
 		return 1, nil
 	}
 	buffer[0] = 0x0 // Encode false as 0x0.
 	return 1, nil
 }
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// Encode encodes the boolean value into the first byte of the buffer.
// If the value is true, the buffer gets the byte value `0x1`, otherwise `0x0`.
// It returns the number of bytes written (always 1) or an error if something goes wrong.
func (b boolKey[T]) Encode(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
if key {
buffer[0] = 0x1
buffer[0] = 0x1 // Encode true as 0x1.
return 1, nil
}
buffer[0] = 0x0
buffer[0] = 0x0 // Encode false as 0x0.
return 1, nil
}
// Encode encodes the boolean value into the first byte of the buffer.
// If the value is true, the buffer gets the byte value `0x1`, otherwise `0x0`.
// It returns the number of bytes written (always 1) or an error if something goes wrong.
func (b boolKey[T]) Encode(buffer []byte, key T) (int, error) {
if len(buffer) < 1 {
return 0, fmt.Errorf("%w: buffer too small, expected at least 1 byte", ErrEncoding)
}
if key {
buffer[0] = 0x1 // Encode true as 0x1.
return 1, nil
}
buffer[0] = 0x0 // Encode false as 0x0.
return 1, nil
}

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Hey! Let's not comment tests

return 0, false, fmt.Errorf("%w: wanted size to be at least 1", ErrEncoding)
}
switch buffer[0] {
case 0:
// If the first byte is 0, return false.
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Let's not add very obvious comment. the code is clearly already saying that, this doesn't add anything.

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Hey thanks for the pr. This goes overboard in terms of documentation of functions and its code. Im going to close this pr, but feel free to open another one after this with less comments

@tac0turtle tac0turtle closed this Oct 15, 2024
@xiaobei0715 xiaobei0715 deleted the cosmos-patch-241014 branch October 18, 2024 11:33
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