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02-Context-or-Narrative/State-of-PureScript-Documentation-2019.md

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 - Explain what "good" documentation is and define a criteria
 - Evaluate PureScript's documentation using that criteria
-- Explain why PureScript's documentation is lacking and what is being done to improve it
+- Explain why PureScript's documentation is seen as lacking
+- Suggest plans to improve the current documentation situation
 - Address various audience's possible concerns or questions centered on these themes:
     - New learners - How should I learn PureScript?
     - PureScript documentation writers - How should I write good maintainable documentation for others?
-    - Core Contributors -
+    - Core Contributors - 
 
 ## What is "Good" Documentation Anyway?
 
-Did someone ever teach you how to write "good" documentation? No, you likely just wrote what came to mind and hoped it was good enough.
+Did someone ever teach you how to write "good" documentation? Probably not - you likely just wrote what came to mind and hoped it was good enough.
 
-So, it helps to understand what is "good" documentation and why.
+Because of this, it's useful to learn a definition of good documentation and understand why it's defined that way.
 
 Essentially, there are 3 factors that affect whether documentation is "good" or not.
-1. The type of documentation
-2. The intended audience
-3. How up-to-date the documentation is
+1. Its intended audience
+2. Its type: the question being answered, targeting a specific subsection of the audience
+3. How accurately it reflects the desired version of the code/project
 
 ### The Types of Documentation
 
 First, there are 5 types of documentation that target specific phases of a learner's experience (as explained in [What Nobody Tells You About Documentation](https://www.divio.com/blog/documentation/) and [Teach, Don't Tell](http://stevelosh.com/blog/2013/09/teach-dont-tell/))
 
-| Type | Analogy | Characteristics
-| -- | -- | -- |
-| The Hook | Selling a product to a potential customer | Answers these questions: <ul><li>What is this thing? / What problem does it solve?</li><li>Why whould I care? / How is this relevant to me for my purposes? / Who should not care?</li><li>How long will it take to learn it and how difficult is the learning curve?</li><li>Where do I go to get started / learn how to use this?</li></ul>
-| Getting Started | Teaching a child how to cook | <ul><li>Focuses on the learner 'doing' stuff, not 'explaining' stuff to the learner</li><li>Provides a small simple working example that teaches the basics</li><li>New learners experience an 'I can use this now!' moment by the end</li><li>Focuses on concrete tasks, not abstract concepts</li><li>Does not use jargon</li><li>Explains only what is necessary and cuts out all else</li><li>Avoids explaining deeper concepts or different ways of doing the same thing</li></ul>
-| How-To Guides | Following a cook book's recipe | <ul><li>Achieves some goal or solves a problem</li><li>States the pre-requisites one needs to have before starting (not a Getting Started Guide)</li><li>The Guide follows a clearly-labeled step-by-step process</li><li>By following the steps, one reproduces the same results without fail</li><li>Explains the different ways one can achieve the same goal</li><li>Explains only what is necessary</li></ul>
-| Explanation | Listening to a CEO answer questions about his company | <ul><li>Explains the context/history</li><li>Explains the significant design decisions made, their alternativees, and the reasons one was chosen over another</li><li>Implies where things could be improved, expanded, refined, etc.</li></ul>
-| Reference | Reading an encyclopedia | <ul><li>Concise explanation of each piece of the code</li><li>The structure of the reference mirrors the structure of the code it documents</li><li>Formatting is consistent throughout the material</li></ul>
+| Learner's Phase | Type | Analogy | Characteristics
+| -- | -- | -- | -- |
+| Curious Outsider | The Hook | Selling a product to a potential customer | Answers these questions: <ul><li>What is this thing? / What problem does it solve?</li><li>Why whould I care? / How is this relevant to me for my purposes? / Who should not care?</li><li>How long will it take to learn it and how difficult is the learning curve?</li><li>Where do I go to get started / learn how to use this?</li></ul>
+| Potential User | Getting Started | Teaching a child how to cook | <ul><li>Focuses on the learner 'doing' stuff, not 'explaining' stuff to the learner</li><li>Provides a small simple working example that teaches the basics</li><li>New learners experience an 'I can use this now!' moment by the end</li><li>Focuses on concrete tasks, not abstract concepts</li><li>Does not use jargon</li><li>Explains only what is necessary and cuts out all else</li><li>Avoids explaining deeper concepts or different ways of doing the same thing</li></ul>
+| New User | How-To Guides | Following a cookbook's recipe | <ul><li>Achieves some goal or solves a problem</li><li>States the pre-requisites one needs to have before starting (not a Getting Started Guide)</li><li>The Guide follows a clearly-labeled step-by-step process</li><li>By following the steps, one reproduces the same results without fail</li><li>Explains the different ways one can achieve the same goal</li><li>Explains only what is necessary</li></ul>
+| Active User | Reference | Reading an encyclopedia | <ul><li>Concise explanation of each piece of the code</li><li>The structure of the reference mirrors the structure of the code it documents</li><li>Formatting is consistent throughout the material</li></ul>
+| Experienced User | Explanation | Listening to a CEO answer questions about his company | <ul><li>Explains the context/history</li><li>Explains the significant design decisions made, their alternativees, and the reasons one was chosen over another</li><li>Implies where things could be improved, expanded, refined, etc.</li></ul>
 
 Moreover, there are clear examples of "bad" documentation (as explained in [Teach, Don't Tell](http://stevelosh.com/blog/2013/09/teach-dont-tell/)):
 
-| Statement | Why it's bad |
+| Documentation Source | Why it's bad |
 | -- | -- |
-| Read the Source Code | Only useful once you are already familiar with it
-| Read the Test Code | While it uses the code, it tends to focus on edge cases, not normal cases, and may not use all possible options/configurations.
-| Read the API docs | One must know the name of the function/value to be able to read its documentation. Most won't know the name until you teach it to them. Likewise, people don't learn by reading alphabetized lists of disconnected information
-| Read the Wiki | Content is usually not written by the code's authors, but by multiple 3rd-party people. There are often multiple disconnected voices throughout the material. It's like asking a student to write his own lesson plan.
+| Source Code | Only useful once you are already familiar with it
+| Test Code | While it uses the code, it tends to focus on edge cases, not normal cases, and may not use all possible options/configurations.
+| API docs | One must know the name of the function/value to be able to read its documentation. Most won't know the name until you teach it to them. Likewise, people don't learn by reading alphabetized lists of disconnected information
+| Wiki | Content is usually not written by the code's authors, but by multiple 3rd-party people. There are often multiple disconnected voices throughout the material. It's like asking a student to write his own lesson plan.
 
 ### The Documentation's Intended Audience