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Change "I" to "We" to make it sound like a team project #265

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This is an example of PR as suggested by the venerable @GegznaV and @bryanhanson

@eoduniyi eoduniyi requested a review from GegznaV August 19, 2020 08:12
Check for wordiness and weird English rules that linguist care about.
This doesn't make a difference to me, but should we avoid personal pronouns ("you", "I", etc.)
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These are good stylistic changes and in fact please continue to make any changes along these lines w/o seeking a review (just merge these types of changes). I trust your judgement on these. Great work!

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In addition to my remarks, I would like that "one sentence per row" rule would be applied (I see that in some places several sentences per row are used). It makes easier to track and review the text in version control system.

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Got it

@GegznaV GegznaV added the Topic: vignette 📗 Related to vignettes of hyperSpec label Aug 20, 2020
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One more remark: the branch should have been named as feature/vign-edits and not vign-edits.

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GegznaV commented Aug 20, 2020

It's enough changes for a single PR. Merging it.

@GegznaV GegznaV merged commit 2b69981 into develop Aug 20, 2020
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