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Minor corrections to punctuation etc #21
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Correcting punctuation
Punctuation. Which/that corrections.
Correcting which/that
which/that correction
which/that correction
| @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ rely on digitised versions of pre-digital business processes, layered on | |||
| top of legacy IT systems, some of which are over 30 years old. They were not | |||
| designed with a digital service in mind, being built to replicate paper | |||
| forms and processes rather than taking advantage of opportunities to | |||
| pre-populate or respond to user’s selections. They have outdated back-end systems which prevent effective data sharing, and/or they have | |||
| pre-populate or respond to user’s selections. They have outdated back-end systems that prevent effective data sharing, and/or they have | |||
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To query this one: is the intended meaning that outdated back-end systems inherently prevent effective data sharing, or that these particular outdated back-end systems prevent effective data sharing?
This dates back to @jackfranklin’s initial commit, so I’m not sure who’s best to ask about the intended meaning here.
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All this content was written by @SheilaBennett, so if we need to clarify meaning, I would talk to Sheila.
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I have checked this with Sheila and this change is fine.
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This is a minor proof for correcting punctuation and use of 'which' and 'that'.
Note: this is not an edit and it is not to style. (Both beyond the scope of this project.)