Update wording in release note

Co-authored-by: Luciano Bello <bel@zurich.ibm.com>

releasenotes/notes/fix-instruction-repeat-conditional-dfe4d7ced54a7bb6.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
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 fixes:
   - |
-    :meth:`.Instruction.repeat` will now correctly move a set :attr:`~.Instruction.condition` to the
+    The method :meth:`.Instruction.repeat` now moves a set :attr:`~.Instruction.condition` to the
     outer returned :class:`~.circuit.Instruction` and leave the inner gates of its definition
     unconditional.  Previously, the method would leave :class:`.ClassicalRegister` instances within
-    the inner definition, which broke the data model.  Fixed `#11935 <https://github.com/Qiskit/qiskit/issues/11935>`__.
+    the inner definition, which was an invalid state, and would manifest itself as seemingly unrelated
+    bugs later, such as during transpilation or export.  Fixed `#11935 <https://github.com/Qiskit/qiskit/issues/11935>`__.