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LeahHirst · Sep 7, 2024 · 8d20bc4 · 8d20bc4
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diff --git a/site/src/components/features.astro b/site/src/components/features.astro
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <style>
   .container {
-    max-width: 1000px;
+    max-width: 1080px;
     margin: auto;
   }
 
@@ -44,15 +44,15 @@
   <div class="features">
     <div class="feature">
       <h3>Whitespace but Less</h3>
-      <p>Nospace features lexical aliasing of Whitespace characters to support <strong>zero-width, single-lined programs</strong> helping to decrease readability.</p>
+      <p>Nospace features lexical aliasing of Whitespace characters to zero-width unicode characters, enabling the creation of <strong>zero-width, single-lined programs</strong> with a truly horrific developer experience.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="feature">
       <h3>Safety at Scale</h3>
-      <p>Say goodbye to stack underflows. Nospace understands Whitespace and uses <strong>type inference to give you great tooling</strong> without additional code.</p>
+      <p>What Nospace lacks in visibility, it makes up for in type safety: Nospace has an advanced type system which understands Whitespace and uses <strong>type inference to give you great tooling</strong> without additional code.</p>
     </div>
     <div class="feature">
       <h3>A Result You Might Trust</h3>
-      <p>Nospace code converts to Whitespace, which <strong>runs anywhere Whitespace runs</strong>, so long as your Whitespace interpreter supports unicode.</p>
+      <p>Nospace code converts to Whitespace, which <strong>runs anywhere Whitespace runs</strong>: in a browser, on a WiFi-enabled toaster, on a smart bidet, and in your apps.</p>
     </div>
   </div>
 </container>
diff --git a/site/src/components/hero.astro b/site/src/components/hero.astro
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     flex-direction: row;
     align-items: center;
     margin: auto;
-    max-width: 1000px;
+    max-width: 1080px;
     flex-wrap: wrap-reverse;
   }
 
@@ -37,6 +37,7 @@
 
   .hero-main p {
     font-size: 1.2rem;
+    font-weight: 200;
   }
 
   .hero-main button {
@@ -118,7 +119,7 @@
 <div class="hero">
   <div class="hero-inner">
     <div class="hero-main">
-      <h1>Nospace is <span class="bold">Whitespace with syntax for types.</span>
+      <h1><span class="bold">The best software is invisible,</span><br />as should your code be.</h1>
       <p>Nospace is a strongly typed esoteric programming language that builds on Whitespace, giving you better tooling at any scale.</p>
       <button>
         <div class="column">