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[Final Submission] Executable tutorial: Continuous benchmarking with Github Actions #1358

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Here's our submission. Looking forward to read your feedback! 😊

You'll find the tutorial in our readme, or here

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Thanks, Will get back to you with my feedback :)

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altaired commented Apr 26, 2021

Feedback on Continuous benchmarking with Github Actions

Awesome tutorial and a really nice area of choice. The tutorial really expand the knowledge on setting up workflows. You are using great pictures explaining the workflow and some subtle funny images (always appreciated). I decided to do the tutorial on Katacoda and it took about 20 minutes ( a bit more, but 20 is a good estimate). Took a while to setup github on katacoda, although can't blame you for that, turns out that it's my own fault, since my work apparently has enforced sso whenever i login from somewhere... It is nice that you provide two ways of doing the tutorial.

Below are some actionable points for you to consider on some of the steps:

Step 1

Step one is clear and fairly concise.

A minor annoyance was that the config of email was set to a katacoda execute field, making execute with the wrong email, suggest that you change it into a copy-paste only, since there is no real point in executing that.

The permission script (chmod) seems more like a chore that has to be done, it does not really feel very relevant to the tutorial. if possible put in in a script that is executed when the step starts automatically instead.

I also tried the other option, to not write any code manually, however this caused problems, since all the files were committed the first time, making the outputs of the action a bit confusing since they were not what was said.

Step 2

Nicely explained with a good image. Great that you take out parts of the bigger image you shown in the beginning, it made it clearer to see what part I was working with.

I have one complaint on this page that follows to some of the other pages. It's not really about the actual content. Rather katacoda. The formatting when copying the code is not correct, which made it a bit annoying to do. I guess one could rewrite it manually but I think it would be nice if you took a closed look at the formatting of it. The issue is consistent on most fields where you copy the longer texts. Works better when you copy the whole file once, maybe let the user copy the whole thing first and the explain everything. There is also a katacoda command to copy things straight into a file (check it out here https://katacoda.com/scenario-examples/scenarios/clipboard).

Step 3

Good explanations and nice with links pointing to additional material. However, noticed that the content of the workflow file on top is different from the one at the bottom. I didn't notice this until the workflow failed when I pushed it, please fix that (missing "src/" prefixed in the python command).

Step 4

Very clear images showing what todo, a nice addition would be to explain the steps shown in the log (how the relate to the steps in the workflow file) making it more intuitive why that subsection should be selected.

Step 5

The steps are explained clearly, would be nice if you gave some more info about what python benchmark does (what measures it takes a.s.o), I know that there is a link, but a short inline explanation would be nice. Also suggest you add a note what the functions do and why you chose them (it is fairly obvious if you know python, but not everyone do) .

Step 6

Same thing with the copying of code messing with the indentation, other than that the content is good. This is where I had an issue with a merge conflict though. Previous steps seems to have produced files that i had to pull before i could push it. Not sure if that was supposed to happen, if not, look into it. If it is on purpose, then I suggest you add a note about it.

Step 7

Nice seeing the continuation of the image series and a clear and concise explanation about github pages. Since you say that the tutorial does not cover bs4, which is completely reasonable, but it feels weird to copy or manually write that code, if it is not explained. Maybe you can include that file automatically and only tell the user that it exists.

Step 9

Awesome with a summary page, and it is really nice that you've used the image overview throughout the tutorial.

Outro

Feel bad that I missed the easter egg, had to go back and try it. It was a really cool one, definitely subtle and fun. Maybe include some kind of hint earlier somehow, or just get the user to check out the scripts folder.

Overall points

  • There are a few spelling mistakes, make sure you read through carefully one more time.

Great work and felt like well spent time doing the tutorial. Definitely learnt something new, even though I was a bit familiar with github actions from the course automation task. Hope the feedback can help you make it even better! Best of luck with your final submission!

/ Simon

jhammarstedt and others added 9 commits April 27, 2021 14:49
Displays what changes we made after reading through the feedback. Both relevant for the tutorial and feedback task.
Our feedback adjustments 
Since this is part of grading for the feedback we also refer to our feedback PR #12
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Thanks for great feedback!

Here are our modifications after going through it:

Feedback adjustments

Extra fix: Got a question from another student that did the tutorial about the possibility to benchmark the two functions simuntaniously. So modified the tutorial, scipts and benchmarks to compare both of them in the same workflow. Also added support for this in the GitHub pages table

Step 1

A minor annoyance was that the config of email was set to a katacoda execute field, making execute with the wrong email, suggest that you change it into a copy-paste only, since there is no real point in executing that.

  • No need to have specific user email so added defaults that are configured automatically in the beginning

The permission script (chmod) seems more like a chore that has to be done, it does not really feel very relevant to the tutorial. if possible put in in a script that is executed when the step starts automatically instead.

  • Fixed by running the clone and permissions as a script beforehand.

I also tried the other option, to not write any code manually, however this caused problems, since all the files were committed the first time, making the outputs of the action a bit confusing since they were not what was said.

  • Fixed by adding a disclaimer that the option 2 would not allow to run the partial workflow

Step 2

I have one complaint on this page that follows to some of the other pages. It's not really about the actual content. Rather katacoda. The formatting when copying the code is not correct, which made it a bit annoying to do. I guess one could rewrite it manually but I think it would be nice if you took a closed look at the formatting of it. The issue is consistent on most fields where you copy the longer texts. Works better when you copy the whole file once, maybe let the user copy the whole thing first and the explain everything. There is also a katacoda command to copy things straight into a file (check it out here https://katacoda.com/scenario-examples/scenarios/clipboard).

  • Fixed by only giving one snippet that will be formated correctly instead of dividing them up

Step 3

The content of the workflow file on top is different from the one at the bottom. I didn't notice this until the workflow failed when I pushed it, please fix that (missing "src/" prefixed in the python command).

  • Fixed by correcting the paths

Step 4

A nice addition would be to explain the steps shown in the log (how the relate to the steps in the workflow file) making it more intuitive why that subsection should be selected.

  • Fixed by adding a explanation for why each step exists in the log

Step 5

Would be nice if you gave some more info about what python benchmark does (what measures it takes a.s.o), I know that there is a link, but a short inline explanation would be nice.

  • Fixed by adding a section about benchmarking and what it outputs

Also suggest you add a note what the functions do and why you chose them (it is fairly obvious if you know python, but not everyone do) .

  • Fixed by adding comments explaining the purpose of the functions in the benchmarking.py script.

Step 6

Same thing with the copying of code messing with the indentation, other than that the content is good.

  • Fixed by adding explanation and a fully formatted snippet at the end

This is where I had an issue with a merge conflict though. Previous steps seems to have produced files that i had to pull before i could push it. Not sure if that was supposed to happen, if not, look into it. If it is on purpose, then I suggest you add a note about it.

  • Fixed by adding note about merge conflict

Step 7

Since you say that the tutorial does not cover bs4, which is completely reasonable, but it feels weird to copy or manually write that code, if it is not explained. Maybe you can include that file automatically and only tell the user that it exists.

  • Fixed by adding the generate_output.json file so user won't have to do it

Outro

Feel bad that I missed the easter egg, had to go back and try it. It was a really cool one, definitely subtle and fun. Maybe include some kind of hint earlier somehow, or just get the user to check out the scripts folder.

  • Added a little note on page 8 to again remind the user to check the script folder, still want it to be somewhat discrete and subtle

Overall points

  • There are a few spelling mistakes, make sure you read through carefully one more time.
  • Looked through the full text again and ran every page through a spelling check

@jhammarstedt jhammarstedt changed the title [Submission for feedback] Tutorial: Continuous benchmarking with Github Actions [Submission] Executable tutorial: Continuous benchmarking with Github Actions Apr 29, 2021
@jhammarstedt jhammarstedt changed the title [Submission] Executable tutorial: Continuous benchmarking with Github Actions [Final Submission] Executable tutorial: Continuous benchmarking with Github Actions Apr 29, 2021
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@carllei and I have made modifications after the feedback (see above) and are now submitting our final version of the tutorial!🎉

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Thanks for the final tutorial submission. I am now merging your PR and we will grade your work based on the final version.

@SophieHYe SophieHYe self-assigned this May 3, 2021
@SophieHYe SophieHYe merged commit 09acaec into KTH:2021 May 3, 2021
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