Adding content so it matched template

app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/_categories.html.erb

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
           <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:
             OpenStruct.new(
               title: "Art and design",
-              description: "Find out how to become an art and design teacher and inspire children to fuel their passion for creativity.",
+              description: "Become an art and design teacher and inspire pupils to fuel their passion for creativity.",
               path: "/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/art-and-design",
             )) %>
           <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:

app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/art-and-design.md

@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
 title: Become an art and design teacher
 title_paragraph: |-
   <p>
-  Teaching art and design opens up a world of creativity.  When pupils create, they learn to take risks, embrace mistakes, and persevere to bring their ideas to life.</p>
+  Teaching art and design opens up a world of creativity. When pupils create, they learn to take risks, embrace mistakes, and persevere to bring their ideas to life.</p>
   <p>
   Tax-free bursaries of $bursaries_postgraduate_artanddesign$ are available for eligible trainee art and design teachers.</p>
 description: |-
-    Find out how to become an art and design teacher, including what you'll be teaching and what funding is available to help you train.
+    Explore what's involved in becoming an art and design teacher, including what you'll be teaching and what funding is available to help you train.
 layout: "layouts/minimal"
 colour: pastel yellow-yellow
 image: "static/images/content/hero-images/maths.jpg"

app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/art-and-design/_article.html.erb

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
   <section class="col col-720 col-space-l-top">
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Why teach art and design</h2>
      <div class="inset">
-    <p>Teaching art and design gives pupils the technical skills needed to express their ideas in a wide variety of materials and media. You'll help pupils develop their own skills by encouraging them to critically review their work. Your pupils will develop an appreciation of art and design, and of the diverse ideas and perspectives of others.</p>
+    <p>Teaching art and design gives pupils the technical skills needed to express their ideas through a range of materials and forms of media. You'll help pupils develop their own skills by encouraging them to critically review their work. Your pupils will develop an appreciation of art and design, and of the diverse ideas and perspectives of others.</p>
     <p>In addition to the personal rewards of teaching art and design, there are practical benefits too, including:</p>
       <ul>
-        <li>a <a href="/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits">competitive salary starting at <%= value :salaries_starting_minshortened %></a> (or higher in London)</li>
+        <li>a <a href="/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/teacher-pay">competitive salary starting at <%= value :salaries_starting_minshortened %></a> (or higher in London)</li>
         <li>a <a href="/life-as-a-teacher/pay-and-benefits/teachers-pension-scheme">generous and secure pension</a></li>
         <li>more holiday days than people in many other professions</li>
         <li>opportunities for progression</li>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
   <section class="col col-720 col-space-l-top">
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Shape your pupils' futures</h2>
-      <p>Teaching art and design opens the door for your pupils to pursue exciting careers in fields as diverse as fashion and textiles, to illustration and video game design.</p>
+      <p>Teaching art and design opens the door for your pupils to pursue exciting careers. They could work in a diverse range of fields, from fashion and textiles, to illustration and video game design.</p>
       <p>By thinking creatively, your pupils could make significant contributions to these diverse and impactful areas.</p>
       <p>Your pupils will learn more from you than you might think.  As their teacher, you'll guide them though the skills they need to show their understanding of art and design. You'll teach them valuable life skills such as critical thinking, adaptability and communication.</p>
   </section>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section class="col col-720">
-    <p>In key stage 4 (14 to 16 years olds) you will help pupils demonstrate skills in:</p>
+    <p>In key stage 4 (14 to 16 years olds) you'll help pupils demonstrate skills in:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>composition and design</li>
       <li>making appropriate use of colour, line, tone, texture, shape and form, in response to an idea, theme or brief</li>
@@ -58,7 +58,6 @@
       <li>exploring relevant resources; analyse, discuss and evaluate images, objects and artefacts; and make and record independent judgements</li>
       <li>using knowledge and understanding of the work of others to develop and extend thinking and inform their own work</li>
       <li>generate and explore potential lines of enquiry using appropriate media and techniques</li>
-  </section>
 
    <section class="col col-space-m col-720">
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Start your journey into teaching art and design</h2>