fix: this loc is a mess

localization/english/pop_types_l_english.yml

@@ -75,15 +75,15 @@
   technicians: "@technicians! $technicians_no_icon$"
 
   # Pop Qualifications
-  ACADEMICS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $academics$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy] and [concept_wealth]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time. #v $creatives$#!, #v $administrators$#!, and #v $clergy$#! have a slight proclivity toward becoming #v $academics$#!."
-  ADMINISTRATORS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $administrators$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time. #v $academics$#! have a slight leaning $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $professionals$#!, #v $servicemembers$#!, and #v $service_workers$#! have a strong proclivity $EM_DASH$ toward becoming #v $administrators$#!."
-  CLERGY_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $clergy$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_religion] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time, while it goes faster for those of [concept_accepted_religion]. #v $academics$#!, #v $laborers$#!, #v $informal_workers$#! and #v $farmers$#! have slight tendency toward becoming #v $clergy$#!."
-  CREATIVES_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Any pop can become #v $creatives$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time. #v $service_workers$#!, #v $clergy$#! have slight $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $academics$#! and #v $professionals$#! have a strong $EM_DASH$ proclivity towards becoming #v $creatives$#!."
-  ENGINEERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $engineers$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy] and [concept_wealth]. #v $technicians$#! have strong tendencies; #v $landlords$#! and #v $investors$#! have some tendencies; and #v $farmers$#! have a slight tendency towards becoming #v $engineers$#!."
-  LANDLORDS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_wealth] can become #v $landlords$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth] and to a lesser degree [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time. #v $investors$#!, #v $engineers$#!, #v $farmers$#!, and #v $clergy$#! have some tendency towards becoming #v $landlords$#!."
-  INVESTORS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_wealth] can become #v $investors$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth] and to a lesser degree [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time. #v $landlords$#!, #v $engineers$#!, #v $professionals$#!, #v $clergy$#! are the pops that have an easier time becoming #v $investors$#!."
+  ACADEMICS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $academics$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy] and [concept_wealth]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time to promote. #v $creatives$#!, #v $administrators$#!, and #v $clergy$#! have a slight bonus toward becoming #v $academics$#!."
+  ADMINISTRATORS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $administrators$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time to promote. #v $academics$#! have a slight bonus $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $professionals$#!, #v $servicemembers$#!, and #v $service_workers$#! have a strong bonus towards becoming #v $administrators$#!."
+  CLERGY_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $clergy$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_religion] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time to promote, while for those of [concept_accepted_religion] promotion comes faster. #v $academics$#!, #v $laborers$#!, #v $informal_workers$#! and #v $farmers$#! have a slight bonus toward becoming #v $clergy$#!."
+  CREATIVES_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Any pop can become #v $creatives$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time to promote. #v $service_workers$#!, #v $clergy$#! have slight bonus whilst #v $academics$#! and #v $professionals$#! have a strong bonus towards becoming #v $creatives$#!."
+  ENGINEERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $engineers$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy] and [concept_wealth]. #v $technicians$#! have a strong bonus; #v $landlords$#! and #v $investors$#! have a moderate bonus; and #v $farmers$#! have a slight bonus towards becoming #v $engineers$#!."
+  LANDLORDS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_wealth] can become #v $landlords$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth] and to a lesser degree [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time to promote. #v $investors$#!, #v $engineers$#!, #v $farmers$#!, and #v $clergy$#! have some bonus towards becoming #v $landlords$#!."
+  INVESTORS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_wealth] can become #v $investors$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth] and to a lesser degree [concept_literacy]. Pops whose [concept_culture] faces [concept_discrimination] take a much longer time to promote. #v $landlords$#!, #v $engineers$#!, #v $professionals$#!, #v $clergy$#! have a bonus towards becoming #v $investors$#!."
   FARMERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Any pop can become #v $farmers$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_wealth]. #v $landlords$#! have the largest chance of becoming #v $farmers$#!; followed by #v $laborers$#! and #v $informal_workers$#! to a lesser degree."
-  OFFICERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only #v $servicemembers$#! or pops of [concept_accepted_culture] can become #v $officers$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. $servicemembers$#! have a proclivity towards $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $professionals$#! have a slight chance of $EM_DASH$ becoming #v $officers$#!. #v $officers$#! are less common in nations with an irregular military."
-  PROFESSIONALS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $professionals$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy] and [concept_wealth]. #v $creatives$#!, #v $academics$#! show the strongest tendency $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $farmers$#!, #v $officers$#!, #v $administrators$#!, #v $landlords$#!, and #v $investors$#! have some chance of $EM_DASH$ becoming #v $professionals$#!."
-  SERVICE_WORKERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Any pop can become #v $service_workers$#!, easier time if pop is [concept_accepted_culture]. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. #v $professionals$#! have the strongly leaning; #v $administrators$#! and #v $informal_workers$#! have some leaning; and #v $creatives$#! have a slight leaning towards becoming #v $service_workers$#!."
+  OFFICERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only #v $servicemembers$#! or pops of [concept_accepted_culture] can become #v $officers$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. $servicemembers$#! have a bonus towards $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $professionals$#! have a slight chance of $EM_DASH$ becoming #v $officers$#!. #v $officers$#! are less common in nations with an irregular military."
+  PROFESSIONALS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Only pops with adequate [concept_literacy] can become #v $professionals$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy] and [concept_wealth]. #v $creatives$#!, #v $academics$#! show the strongest bonus $EM_DASH$ whilst #v $farmers$#!, #v $officers$#!, #v $administrators$#!, #v $landlords$#!, and #v $investors$#! have some chance of $EM_DASH$ becoming #v $professionals$#!."
+  SERVICE_WORKERS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Any pop can become #v $service_workers$#!, but promote more easily when an [concept_accepted_culture]. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. #v $professionals$#! have a strong bonus; #v $administrators$#! and #v $informal_workers$#! have a moderate bonus; and #v $creatives$#! have the strongest bonus towards becoming #v $service_workers$#!."
   TECHNICIANS_QUALIFICATIONS_DESC: "Pops with minimal [concept_literacy] can become #v $technicians$#!. Potential increases with greater [concept_literacy]. #v $laborers$#! and #v $engineers$#! have a particularly easy time becoming #v $technicians$#!."