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Slack CLI
Major Learning Goals/Code Review
Criteria | yes/no, and optionally any details/lines of code to reference |
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Practices best practices working with APIs. The .env is not checked into git, and no API token was directly used in the Ruby code without ENV . |
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Practices error handling with APIs. For all pieces of code that make an API call, it handles API requests that come back with errors/error status codes appropriately. | ✔️ |
Implements inheritance and inheritance idioms. There is a Recipient class. User and Channel inherit from Recipient . In Recipient , there are appropriate methods defined that are used in both User and Channel . Some may be implemented. Some may be template methods. |
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Practices clean code. lib/slack.rb only interacts with Workspace to show a separation of responsibilities. Complex logic is broken into smaller helper methods. |
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Practices instance methods vs. class methods appropriately. The methods to list all Channels or Users is likely a class method within those respective classes. | ✔️ |
Practices best practices for testing. The project has and uses VCR mocking when running tests, and can run offline. | ✔️ |
Practices writing tests. The User , Channel , and Workspace classes have unit tests. |
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Practices writing tests. There are tests for sending messages (the location of these tests may differ, but is likely in Recipient ) |
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Practices git with at least 15 small commits and meaningful commit messages | ✔️ |
Functional Requirements
Functional Requirement | yes/no |
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As a user of the CLI program, I can list users and channels | ✔️ |
As a user of the CLI program, I can select users and channels | ✔️ |
As a user of the CLI program, I can show the details of a selected user or channel | ✔️ |
As a user of the CLI program, when I input something inappropriately, the program runs without crashing | If I try to send a message before selecting a user/channel, the error bubbles up. Consider how you could gracefully handle this. |
Overall Feedback
Excellent job overall. This code is well-written and well-tested. It is clear to me that the learning goals around understanding the request/response cycle, consuming an API, and implementing a design using inheritance from scratch were all met.
I've left a few inline comments for you to review below focused on ways to enhance user experience. The logic in the slack.rb code allows exceptions to bubble up to the user.
Of particular note, you've done a great job breaking out functionality into helper methods. Keep up the hard work!
Overall Feedback | Criteria | yes/no |
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Green (Meets/Exceeds Standards) | 7+ in Code Review && 3+ in Functional Requirements | ✔️ |
Yellow (Approaches Standards) | 6+ in Code Review && 2+ in Functional Requirements | |
Red (Not at Standard) | 0-5 in Code Review or 0,1 in Functional Reqs, or assignment is breaking/doesn’t run with less than 5 minutes of debugging |
Code Style Bonus Awards
Was the code particularly impressive in code style for any of these reasons (or more...?)
Quality | Yes? |
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Descriptive/Readable | ✅ |
Concise | ✅ |
Logical/Organized | ✅ |
def validate_property_type(property_type) | ||
property_type.downcase! | ||
valid_property_types = ["name", "id"] | ||
return false unless valid_property_types.include?(property_type) |
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Nice use of a postfix conditional.
until validate_property_type(property_type) | ||
puts "Please enter either name or ID" | ||
property_type = gets.chomp | ||
end |
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Great use of a helper method.
if recipient == nil | ||
puts "This #{recipient_string} doesn't exist! Exiting..." | ||
end |
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Consider writing this as a postfix conditional.
end | ||
@selected = selected_user | ||
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return selected_user |
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Consider whether selected_user
needs to be returned, as it is stored in the instance variable @selected
if property == "id" | ||
selected_channel = channels.find{|channel_instance| channel_instance.slack_id == channel} | ||
elsif property == "name" | ||
selected_channel = channels.find{|channel_instance| channel_instance.channel_name == channel} | ||
end |
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Great use of the enumerable method `find1
def validate_post(response) | ||
raise SlackAPIError.new("API call failed with code #{response.code} and error #{response['error']}") if response["ok"] == false | ||
return "Thank you this message was sent" | ||
end |
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Great use of a helper method.
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def validate_input(input) | ||
input.downcase! | ||
raise ArgumentError.new("Not a valid input") unless VALID_INPUT.include?(input) |
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Argument errors are great to raise in your source code, but in your CLI code, you should consider how you can handle invalid user input so that the error doesn't bubble up and the user gets the opportunity to correct their mistake.
Assignment Submission: Slack CLI
Congratulations! You're submitting your assignment. Please reflect on the assignment with these questions.
Reflection