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Anya and Lina's Adagrams #16
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Adagrams
Major Learning Goals/Code Review
Criteria | yes/no, and optionally any details/lines of code to reference |
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Correctly creates and calls methods with proper syntax (parameters, return statements, etc.) | ✔️ |
Uses correct syntax for conditional logic and iteration | ✔️ |
Practices git with at least 3 small commits and meaningful commit messages | ✔️ |
Utilizes unit tests to verify code; tests can run using the command $ rake and we see test successes and/or failures |
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Practices pair programming; the reflection question on pair programming is answered | ✔️ |
Functional Requirements
Functional Requirement | yes/no |
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For the draw_letters method, there is an appropriate data structure to store the letter distribution. (You are more likely to draw an 'E' than an 'X'.) |
✔️ |
Utilizes unit tests to verify code; all tests for draw_letters and uses_available_letters? pass |
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Utilizes unit tests to verify code; all tests for score_word pass |
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Utilizes unit tests to verify code; all tests for highest_score_from pass |
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Overall Feedback
Great work on this project! Your code is clear, concise, and you've done a great job working through some tricky logic. It is clear that the learning goals around writing methods and manipulating data were met. Keep up the hard work!
Overall Feedback | Criteria | yes/no |
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Green (Meets/Exceeds Standards) | 4+ in Code Review && 3+ in Functional Requirements | ✔️ |
Yellow (Approaches Standards) | 3+ in Code Review && 2+ in Functional Requirements | ✔ |
Red (Not at Standard) | 0-2 in Code Review or 0,1 in Functional Reqs, or assignment is breaking/doesn’t run with less than 5 minutes of debugging | ✔ |
Code Style Bonus Awards
Was the code particularly impressive in code style for any of these reasons (or more...?)
Quality | Yes? |
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Perfect Indentation | ✅ |
Elegant/Clever | ✅ |
Descriptive/Readable | ✅ |
Concise | ✅ |
Logical/Organized | ✅ |
cloned_letter_in_hand.slice!(cloned_letter_in_hand.index(letter)) | ||
include_letter_array << true | ||
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include_letter_array << false |
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Consider simply returning false
here.
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word.upcase.each_char do |char| | ||
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case char |
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While this case
statement works, it means that the information about which letter has which score is locked into this piece of code, and can't easily be used elsewhere. For example, if you wanted to display the value of each letter in a hand, you would need to repeat this work.
An alternative approach would be to store the letter scores in a hash, something like this:
LETTER_SCORES = {
"A" => 1
"B" => 3,
"C" => 3,
"D" => 2,
# ...
}
Then to get the score for a letter, you can say LETTER_SCORES[letter]
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end | ||
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# tie breaker method | ||
def tie_breaker(winners_array) |
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Great work breaking out this logic into its own helper method
array_of_words << word_hash | ||
end | ||
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# finds the highest score |
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Great use of comments to increase readability.
Assignment Submission: Adagrams
Congratulations! You're submitting your assignment. Please reflect on the assignment with these questions.
Reflection
Enumerable
mixin? If so, where and why was it helpful?