From 40b6fc669f0d3a3926ca226c5c437c3536c7e084 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2022 21:59:05 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Minor edits

---
 content/education.md    |  2 +-
 content/no-code.md      |  6 +++---
 content/social-media.md | 12 ++++++------
 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/education.md b/content/education.md
index dc6ea2e..ab8a9ad 100644
--- a/content/education.md
+++ b/content/education.md
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ These _persona_ scenarios show examples of accessibility _problems_ that disable
   </ul>
 </div>
 
-Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, and visual disabilities need to be able to preview the course content before posting it for students.
+Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, or visual disabilities need to be able to preview the course content before posting it for students.
 
 ### Everyone can edit content
 
diff --git a/content/no-code.md b/content/no-code.md
index 8476a62..03797ed 100644
--- a/content/no-code.md
+++ b/content/no-code.md
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ These _persona_ scenarios show examples of accessibility _problems_ that disable
   </ul>
 </div>
 
-Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, and visual disabilities need to be able to add, customize, and remove blocks of content.
+Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, or visual disabilities need to be able to add, customize, and remove blocks of content.
 
 ### The tool provides accessible components and templates
 
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, and visual d
     </li>
     <li>
       <p><span class="issue">Works well: </span><span><q>
-        The calendar widget that the tool provides works great for all my clients, including the older clients. The tool helped me pick color combinations that are easy to see.
+        The calendar widget that the tool provides works great for all my clients, including the older ones. The tool helped me pick color combinations that are easy to see.
       </q></span></p>
     </li>
   </ul>
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ The templates, components, and pre-authored content that your tool provides need
 ### The tool helps make images and videos accessible
 
 <p><span class="persona">Persona: </span>
-  Dacso runs an automotive repair shop and he does a lot of body work. His daughter created a website for him to showcase his work. Dacso uploads before-and-after photos of his projects. He also posts videos with simple maintenance tips.
+  Dacso runs an car repair shop and does a lot of body work. His daughter created a website for him to showcase his work. Dacso uploads before-and-after photos of his projects. He also posts videos with simple maintenance tips.
 </p>
 <div class="quotes">
   <ul>
diff --git a/content/social-media.md b/content/social-media.md
index 6903787..0c7bd87 100644
--- a/content/social-media.md
+++ b/content/social-media.md
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ Content creators and content consumers need social media tools that:
 
 ## Example Scenarios
 
-These _persona_ scenarios show examples of accessibility _problems_ that disabled people experience using no-code tools, and what _works well_ in tools that are accessible.
+These _persona_ scenarios show examples of accessibility _problems_ that disabled people experience using social media tools, and what _works well_ in tools that are accessible.
 
 ### Everyone can rely on your tool
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ These _persona_ scenarios show examples of accessibility _problems_ that disable
   </ul>
 </div>
 
-Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, and visual disabilities need your platform to work with their settings and specialized software, called assistive technologies.
+Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, or visual disabilities need your platform to work with their settings and specialized software, called assistive technologies.
 
 ### Everyone can read and process content at their own pace
 
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ Users who have auditory, cognitive, neurological, physical, speech, and visual d
   <ul>
     <li>
       <p><span class="issue">Problem: </span><span><q>
-        When content refreshes too fast, I have problems keeping up-to-date. It is difficult for me to manage new comments.
+        When content refreshes too fast, I have problems keeping up. It is difficult for me to manage new comments.
       </q></span></p>
     </li>
     <li>
@@ -148,18 +148,18 @@ People who use social media have different abilities. For example, they may read
 ### The tool help create accessible multimedia
 
 <p><span class="persona">Persona: </span>
-  Enhamed manages the social profile of a client. He uploads images and videos to showcase his client's activities. His client now asks him to make these media accessible, but he does not know well how to do it.
+  Enhamed manages the social profile of a client. He uploads images and videos to showcase his client's activities. His client has asked him to make these media accessible, but he does not know how to do this.
 </p>
 <div class="quotes">
   <ul>
     <li>
       <p><span class="issue">Problem: </span><span><q>
-        My client has now requested me to make all media accessible, including images, audio, and video. I am not sure how to get this done, and I can’t find anything on my tool that explains it.
+        My client has now requested that I make all media accessible, including images, audio, and video. I am not sure how to get this done, and I can’t find anything in my tool that explains it.
       </q></span></p>
     </li>
     <li>
       <p><span class="issue">Works well: </span><span><q>
-        When I upload an image, the tool asks me if it needs alternative text and gives guidance on how to write it. When I upload a video, the tool suggests me to add transcripts, captions, and descriptions as appropriate.
+        When I upload an image, the tool asks me if it needs alternative text and gives guidance on how to write it. When I upload a video, the tool suggests that I add transcripts, captions, and descriptions as appropriate.
       </q></span></p>
     </li>
   </ul>

From 740063dd2d22ce8fdecd792031658fbf66bee267 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: daniel-montalvo <49305434+daniel-montalvo@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2022 11:42:58 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update content/no-code.md

---
 content/no-code.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/content/no-code.md b/content/no-code.md
index 03797ed..50c6bda 100644
--- a/content/no-code.md
+++ b/content/no-code.md
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ The templates, components, and pre-authored content that your tool provides need
 ### The tool helps make images and videos accessible
 
 <p><span class="persona">Persona: </span>
-  Dacso runs an car repair shop and does a lot of body work. His daughter created a website for him to showcase his work. Dacso uploads before-and-after photos of his projects. He also posts videos with simple maintenance tips.
+  Dacso runs a car repair shop and does a lot of body work. His daughter created a website for him to showcase his work. Dacso uploads before-and-after photos of his projects. He also posts videos with simple maintenance tips.
 </p>
 <div class="quotes">
   <ul>