From 7e6c487b9cb0addabe8729118e0dbb5eba92feb9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: 4TT1L4 <2914096+4TT1L4@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 25 Aug 2022 13:50:11 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Update cargo-toml-vs-cargo-lock.md

 - Improved wording ('rev' is not a line)
---
 src/doc/src/guide/cargo-toml-vs-cargo-lock.md | 3 ++-
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/doc/src/guide/cargo-toml-vs-cargo-lock.md b/src/doc/src/guide/cargo-toml-vs-cargo-lock.md
index 80e3aa8d1e5..9b0426684bf 100644
--- a/src/doc/src/guide/cargo-toml-vs-cargo-lock.md
+++ b/src/doc/src/guide/cargo-toml-vs-cargo-lock.md
@@ -43,7 +43,8 @@ could happen. There could be more commits to `regex` in the meantime, and my
 build would include new commits while yours would not. Therefore, we would
 get different builds. This would be bad because we want reproducible builds.
 
-We could fix this problem by putting a `rev` line in our `Cargo.toml`:
+We could fix this problem by defining a specific `rev` value in our `Cargo.toml`,
+so Cargo could know exactly which revision to use when building the package:
 
 ```toml
 [dependencies]