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   # Comprehensive Monitoring Kit for .NET
 
   ## What is .NET Framework? 
-  .NET Framework is a software product developed by Microsoft. It is a platform used on the Microsoft Windows operating system to build desktop and web applications. .NET supports many programming languages, so it is multifunctional and sophisticated.
+  .NET Framework is a software product developed by Microsoft. It is a platform used on the Microsoft Windows operating system to build desktop and web applications and supports many programming languages.
 
   ## Why monitor .NET? 
   .NET monitoring is an essential activity in .NET software development that enables software developers to observe the performance of an application in real-time. .NET monitoring enables a swift intervention if issues arise while the application runs. 
 
   ## What should you look for in a .NET Monitor? 
   An ideal .NET Performance Monitor must offer comprehensive and actionable information that software developers need to troubleshoot an application successfully. Some key components are:
-  preemptive performance monitoring
-  comprehensive full-stack performance monitoring
-  intimate code insights 
-  granular error identification mechanism 
-  comprehensive .NET Framework, Common Language Runtime (CLR), and Internet Information Services (IIS) monitoring 
+  - Preemptive performance monitoring
+  - Comprehensive full-stack performance monitoring
+  - Intimate code insights 
+  - Granular error identification mechanism 
+  - Comprehensive .NET Framework, Common Language Runtime (CLR), and Internet Information Services (IIS) monitoring 
  
   ## What’s Included in this Pack:
-  - high-value alerts 
-  - code-related insights that acquaint developers with the intricate details of their application’s health and status by providing detailed information on errors, database queries, and transaction traces 
-  - a query builder that allows developers to create customized dashboard so that they can focus on the particular information they deem more relevant to their performance tracking activity 
-  - preemptive notifications that proactively inform developers about the status of their applications 
+  - High-value alerts 
+  - Code-related insights that acquaint developers with the intricate details of their application’s health and status by providing detailed information on errors, database queries, and transaction traces 
+  - Alerts that proactively inform developers about the status of their applications 
 
   ## What Makes This Pack Unique?
   With this quickstart, you can monitor health and status in one place, focus on the most important information, and enable preventative maintenance strategy.