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[DOC][FR/EN] Typo + redaction issu about IMP #6447

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omercier opened this issue Jul 6, 2018 · 0 comments
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[DOC][FR/EN] Typo + redaction issu about IMP #6447

omercier opened this issue Jul 6, 2018 · 0 comments

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omercier commented Jul 6, 2018


DOCUMENTATION ISSUE REPORT

In this part of the documentation : https://documentation-fr.centreon.com/docs/centreon/en/2.8.x/configuration_guide/imp/index.html#accedez-aux-plugin-packs-de-centreon-imp

First, in French, there is a typo:

6 Free Plugin Paks(*)
Missing a 'c' character.

Then, the following paragraph has some issues in both french and english languages:

(*) Nous savons tous que 6 = 11! Aux 6 Plugin Packs délivrés gratuitement avec Centreon 3.4, s’ajoutent 5 Plugin Packs Centreon (Central, DB, Poller, MAP et MBI). Comme ils servent à superviser la plateforme de supervision, nous préférons ne pas les compter. packs servant à superviser votre plateforme de supervision.

  • 6 != 11
  • délivrés --> livrés
  • "compter. packs servant à..." missing words?

Yes 11 is different than 6 but we prefer to do not count Centreon Plugin Packs to monitor your Centreon platform.

  • 11 different from 6
  • "we prefer to do not count" --> "we prefer not to count"
  • "[we prefer not to count] Centreon Plugin Packs to monitor your Centreon platform" is not clear, I would rather write: "[we prefer not to count] the Centreon Plugin Packs that are only useful to monitor your Centreon platform."
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