From 1fe426f0ae30263eff74a75fb9028bc173894d0f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: James Koster <james@jameskoster.co.uk>
Date: Wed, 5 Jul 2023 10:38:06 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Update welcome guide copy (#52282)

---
 packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/page.js     | 4 ++--
 packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/template.js | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/page.js b/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/page.js
index 2f162c0b2e84e9..adb64a8033e999 100644
--- a/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/page.js
+++ b/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/page.js
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ export default function WelcomeGuidePage() {
 		return null;
 	}
 
-	const heading = __( 'Editing your page' );
+	const heading = __( 'Editing a page' );
 
 	return (
 		<Guide
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ export default function WelcomeGuidePage() {
 							</h1>
 							<p className="edit-site-welcome-guide__text">
 								{ __(
-									'We’ve recently introduced the ability to edit pages within the site editor. You can switch to editing your template using the settings sidebar.'
+									'It’s now possible to edit page content in the site editor. To customise other parts of the page like the header and footer switch to editing the template using the settings sidebar.'
 								) }
 							</p>
 						</>
diff --git a/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/template.js b/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/template.js
index cf0e723ab46090..f0c02c09d1124a 100644
--- a/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/template.js
+++ b/packages/edit-site/src/components/welcome-guide/template.js
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ export default function WelcomeGuideTemplate() {
 		return null;
 	}
 
-	const heading = __( 'Editing your template' );
+	const heading = __( 'Editing a template' );
 
 	return (
 		<Guide
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ export default function WelcomeGuideTemplate() {
 							</h1>
 							<p className="edit-site-welcome-guide__text">
 								{ __(
-									'You’re now editing your page’s template. To switch back to editing your page you can click the back button in the toolbar.'
+									'Note that the same template can be used by multiple pages, so any changes made here may affect other pages on the site. To switch back to editing the page content click the ‘Back’ button in the toolbar.'
 								) }
 							</p>
 						</>