diff --git a/src/pages/index.astro b/src/pages/index.astro
index 40d2b9b..4006f67 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.astro
+++ b/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -24,9 +24,8 @@ import laptopImageDark from "../assets/40/laptop/dark.png";
           </div>
           <span class="text-lg max-w-xs"
             >Ultramarine Linux is a Fedora-based Linux distribution designed to
-            stay out of your way and be easy to use. All editions come with
-            several tweaks preapplied to make initial setup and daily usage
-            seamless.</span
+            stay out of your way and be easy to use, by shipping preapplied
+            tweaks to make initial setup and daily usage seamless.</span
           >
           <div
             id="button-row"
@@ -63,7 +62,7 @@ import laptopImageDark from "../assets/40/laptop/dark.png";
           <a
             href="#migrate"
             class="text-gray-500 dark:text-gray-400 md:block hidden ml-1 tracking-wide"
-            >Already using Fedora? Click here for a migration script.</a
+            >Using Fedora? Click here for a migration script.</a
           >
         </div>
         <div id="hero-right" class="lg:block hidden">
@@ -101,12 +100,12 @@ import laptopImageDark from "../assets/40/laptop/dark.png";
           class="text-left lg:text-justify text-lg max-w-4xl bg-gray-200 dark:bg-gray-800 rounded-lg p-4 mt-0 mb-8 shadow-lg"
         >
           Ultramarine Linux is an operating system designed for your
-          own personal workstation (or battlestation). It is designed to be as
-          easy to use as possible, and stays out of your way. Ultramarine
-          keeps up with the latest and greatest software in the open-source
-          community, while staying stable and secure. Ultramarine is for
-          everyone, from the beginner to the tech enthusiast, and even Windows
-          dropouts!
+          personal workstation (or battlestation). It is designed to be
+          intuitive and easy to use, shipping numerous simple environments.
+          Ultramarine keeps up with the latest and greatest software in the
+          open-source community, while staying stable and secure. Ultramarine
+          is for everyone, from the beginner to the tech enthusiast, and even
+          Windows dropouts!
         </div>
         <div class="grid grid-cols-1 md:grid-cols-3 gap-4 lg:gap-8">
           <div
@@ -120,7 +119,7 @@ import laptopImageDark from "../assets/40/laptop/dark.png";
               Based on Fedora®
             </h3>
             <p class="max-w-sm text-lg text-left">
-              Designed to be 100% bug-for-bug compatible with Fedora,
+              Based on Fedora Linux,
               Ultramarine offers the latest and greatest in open-source
               software, yet maintaining rock-solid stability. Making sure things
               don't break is our top priority.
@@ -137,11 +136,11 @@ import laptopImageDark from "../assets/40/laptop/dark.png";
               Developer Friendly
             </h3>
             <p class="max-w-sm text-lg text-left">
-              Ultramarine provides developer-friendly (and friendly for the
-              average user) tools to make sure you can get the most out of your
-              system. We're making it as easy and accessible as possible for
-              everyone to create and package their software for Ultramarine (and
-              in extension, Fedora!).
+              Ultramarine provides both developer-friendly and user-friendly
+              tools to make sure you can get the most out of your system.
+              We're making it as easy and accessible as possible for everyone
+              to create and package their software for Ultramarine (and in
+              extension, Fedora!).
             </p>
           </div>
           <div