Yorukura: subtitles feedback

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Ep. 01

~ 01:12
佳歩 这是偷拍
佳歩 這是偷拍

It looks like 歩 is not written correctly in Chinese. (歩 -> 步)

~ 16:48
殴打团体成员!?
毆打團體成員!?

From the wiki of the repo, the punctuation in the Chinese part here should be reversed? (!? -> ?!)

Ep. 03

~ 09:38
Sma-Pay结算
Sma-Pay結算

It might be better if a half-width space can be added between English and Chinese: consistent with the Japanese part of anime.

Preview

~ 14:43
通过旋转来增幅能量
透過旋轉來增幅能量

The meaning of the word 增幅 in Chinese and Japanese is not the same (形同意不等). I did a quick search and it seems that the Japanese meaning is amplify / amplification, while the Chinese meaning is degree of increase or growth rate. Judging from the context and video content, maybe should change the vocabulary? Like 增加.

~ 16:00
来自sma-pay的消息
來自sma-pay的消息

Sma-Pay seems to be treated as a proprietary word in anime. Maybe it would be better to stick strictly to uppercase and lowercase? For example, GitHub is the standard name for this platform.

Preview

Ep. 04

~ 10:40
能做一个自我介绍吗
能做一個自我介紹嗎

做 -> 作 maybe better?

~ 18:16
不知道大家喜欢那种
不知道大家喜歡那種

那 -> 哪

Ep. 05

~ 02:54
那就当做前进了一步
那就當做前進了一步

当做/當做 -> 当作/當作 maybe better?

~ 12:19
我们特别喜欢那副画
我們特別喜歡那幅畫
~ 12:30
第一次二创是那副画 可真让人高兴
第一次二創是那幅畫 可真讓人高興

副 -> 幅. JPTC looks fine.

Ep. 06

~ 05:58
必须为Live做宣传嘛
必須為Live做宣傳嘛

做 -> 作 maybe better?

~ 23:26
我们也离10万订阅更近一步了
我們也離10萬訂閱更近一步了

近 -> 进/進

Sources

Unbatch releases.

[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][01][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][01][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][02][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][02][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][03][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][03][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][04][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][04][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][05][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][05][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][06][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][06][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][07][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Yoru no Kurage wa Oyogenai][07][1080p][JPTC].mp4

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Edit: Added description for Ep.03.

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Added description up to episode 07.